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I keep coming back to the food in this chapter and what it represents. It's not accidental that the author builds entire emotional scenes around meals. The fried egg. The steamed buns. The porridge. Food is how people express what they can't say out loud. That ruined egg is the perfect symbol for Xu Jingchu's entire position in this house. It's imperfect, yes, but also tender and springy and honestly better than the canteen versions. She's being punished for being slightly flawed, but her flaws don't diminish her value. Tingjun eats it without knowing and finds it delicious—that's the tragedy and the hope of it all. He's consuming her kindness without recognizing it as such. The buns are even richer symbolism. Xu Jingchu making buns from scratch—kneading dough, preparing fillings, steaming them until they're "snowy white and fluffy"—this is her asserting herself in a space where she has no power. She can't study yet. She can't work yet. But she CAN feed this family. And when the neighbors compliment the smell, when Jianbai's pride swells, when even Qin Yajuan eats six buns despite her resentment... food becomes the great leveler. It's the one language everyone in this house speaks fluently. Then there's the sewing. Newspapers as pattern templates. This is such a specific, grounded detail that carries so much meaning. Xu Jingchu is building something from nothing—literally cutting patterns from discarded paper and turning them into clothing. The 1980s setting matters here. This is an era of scarcity, of making do, of ingenuity. Every stitch is an act of survival. And the college entrance exam looming in July next year—that's the ultimate symbol of upward mobility, of a second chance at a life she never had. Five hours of study per day, mapped out like a military operation. This woman is building a new life brick by brick, bun by bun, stitch by stitch.
The atmosphere in these chapters is just so rich and immersive. Let me paint you a picture: Chen Qing walking through the machinery factory compound at night, streetlights casting long shadows, knowing that everyone in the area is basically a colleague working shifts around the clock. There's this incredible sense of a closed, self-contained world where the factory isn't just a workplace—it's a entire ecosystem. People live there, raise children there, complain about apartment sizes and meat coupon subsidies there. And then the recycling station scene—fifty cents to enter, a flashlight in hand, scanning through piles of discarded books and newspapers under the gatekeeper's suspicious gaze. The gatekeeper literally warns her that 'the Revolutionary Committee isn't foolish enough to send valuable items here.' You can feel the era pressing down on every scene. The evening party reception is another standout: thirty-seven researchers, three large tables piled high with chicken, duck, goose, and fish, and Chen Qing standing at the entrance like a nervous greeter while Director Liu sweats behind her. The contrast between the lavish spread meant for honored guests and Chen Qing's genuine hunger (both literal and metaphorical) is just devastating in the best way.
wow that's very nice Chinese story keep up the good work
After reading up to 5 chapter. So far I must say that I'm impressed by story so far. The writing is good with no grammar issues.A small criticism I have is that the chapters are quite long. Maybe cutting them down into small paragraph.overall, enjoying it so far
Attractive way of narration and a beautiful idea
First time reading Sci_fi and I'm loving it so much, can't wait to read more chapters... waiting for update author san?☺️
So far loving the story, Hope author will not spoil the story with bunch of harem girls and still loved the concept. Will recommend everyone to try it once
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hi author i wanna ask you something,will the main character help people or try to save anyone and will this have any poison like romance friendship and family love, asking to know if this is a true villain story
I like the uniqueness of the main character and her two love interests and I want moreeee!!!!!!???
pardon my bluntness but no R-18 I don't mean Too much but the should be at least intimacy between them if you get what I mean .
this novel has great potential , the author focuses more on the relationship between the family and building their characters, it's good only sometimes I forget the age of the fl since she REALLY acts childish ( especially with that God fairy ...) and sometimes naive ... i really hope her character develops fast another point that I appreciate this novel for is that the face slapping and schemes . the ideas and revenge is well written and very logical.the novel is yet at the baby stage and sure it will be one of the great gems in this site with great ideas and improvement .thank you author ??
