The story was engaging with all language and description that wasn't too 'filler' or exaggerated. I love that the women character wasn't described weirdly like monsters, compared to other author. The plot also clear and fighting scene was amazing. Like other author, always cut the fighting scene in between with unnecessary description of all detailed explanation which sometimes irks me. Plus, his character was sometimes too naive and sometimes too ruthless. He only learn disguise after twice almost died. Despite all assassination, he keep being careless and all the time was stalked and killed. His ability totally get useless after few fight/usage.And i also get bit annoyed when mc decided to find his prospective dao partner whom been missing for years during critical junction where he gonna upgrade to Golden Core. He already aware of all those many assassins and bad people targeting to kill him but still carelessly going out for plot purpose. Also he noticed that the tribulation definitely happen during these time, the probability was high and definitely not right timing to start dao partner thingy. It's bit stupid. Overall, it's good read but could be more perfect. I like it.
