all the best for the novel of my favourite author
Overall a fun, light read. Some writing mistakes here and there but nothing that'll ruin your reading experience.I honestly would prefer less bedroom camping from the MC. (But I won't complain that much since this is a common trope in manga/light novels of this nature)One thing that did have me confused was... how do I word this... the MC's misogynistic-misandrist views towards their fellow man?There seems to be a lot of negativity towards "relying on a man" and a lot of describing the MLs so far as "A Man" as if they're an object or something?I don't think I'm wording this correctly... Uhh... like how some Writer's write about not wanting to "rely on a woman" for something or describe women as "a woman" in a... derogatory regard?I get the same vibes from our MC sometimes, despite the fact they're supposed to be male, both in the past and in the present(?).I don't know, to me the MC shouldn't be referring to the ML's in that way, nor should he be ashamed that a fellow man is helping him out. Brothers in arms, and all...But hey, that's just a me opinion!
Utterly broken and completely unable to be read
The more fungus, the more noble someone is.
Ah, right, he was an unexpected person, how about give him a joke that he would not have expected and I was sure that would make him laugh.
Teret-Teret-Tet-Teret-Tetet!
Today our school has meeting, so the time of study is just few hours.
Max was dropped off here at the age of 5 months, a time where he had already began to crawl and could even almost get to the point of nearly talking coherent words. If he had had teeth at the time then he no doubt would've been having various conversations. Despite him being quite a special kid, not one single person at the foster home seemed to care. In fact Conalds grew a dislike for the small little toddler almost the moment he saw the intelligence in the baby's eyes. He felt that it was unnatural and he right then and there refused to feed it, let alone change its diaper.
So she'll never gonna confess to me again. Cause she left. Regret is always in the end. I shouldve not dumped her in the first place. Now, I regret it a lot.
-Não deveria ter outro jeito? Sabe você é uma deusa.
but meet welf first .
He raised his eyebrows, and I protested: "Leastways not till I started telling Mr. Tateabout it. Jem wasn't scared. Asked him and he said he wasn't. Besides, nothin's realscary except in books."