Honestly you have a pretty good story going on,good character and development kinda like the saintess too with her godhood phobia.But I have one question author the MC is rather a little idiotic I mean the main villain is not some game character he is a human/God who can think so how can our MC think that main villain will follow the game story 100% with no changes.I guess it's one of flaw as I recently read in the latest chapter?
Nice and compelling story, I was hooked, the writer did a good job here.
Perfect for readers who enjoy thoughtful and imaginative storytelling, this book promises to leave a lasting impression. I love it! Can't wait for the next update.
Hoping for new chapters ? and I wanna say thank you those who took their time to try it and for those who glanced by it I thank you anyway
hello, Can you review this book----------------------------------------------------------------THE PART OF NO RETURN : FIRST HUMAN EMPIRE------------------------------ Please
This is one hell of a story, great exchange of dialogues between the fl and the ml. The setting was well described and nice flow of plot. A good read.
Hey man I think you should take a break you are starting new books and discontinuing them shortly after and this going out of hand as you discarded 2 or 3 books in last 2 months. I really think you should take a break as I feel your interest is getting lost and it is not good for you nor for us readers. You even discontinued LORD OF TIME it was going so good as just bam you stopped posting then you started new book then stopped again and the cycle repeats. Do please take care of yourself Your well-wisher
Very intriguing, captivating.. each chapter is full of suspense making you crave for what is to come in the next chapter
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Although the MC is good , but how can one story have 2 mc , you are trying to create 2 mc , which is very for every Story .In any story there can be one mc . Other can be supporting characters or side characters
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