You know deep down deep inside I still have hope, even if it's very little, I still have it, but it's hard you know... it was interesting at first not much, but it was enough to pass the time Then comes nationalism....?I stopped right away, because I know this is just the beginning and the trend is getting worse...and just from the other comments I was right to stop
I’m giving them all a 5 because you executed them perfectly. honestly, world background, and character design deserved more than a 5!!! I loved how descriotive it was, it flowed easily and I felt like I was standing right there. I’m also a fan of an epic plot, and I can’t wait to see how this story will end!!! Greak work!!!!!!!!
Wow. Just wow. I have absolutely no words. The author was incredible with the descriptive writing, I almost felt like I was there. Well done, keep up the good work.
Sorry author.. The title of your story is very much the reason why I read your novel, but the more I read the more I felt frustrated and..from the first chapter until now which is already 730+ the more I got annoyed of your too cruel JL. Well, from the beginning of the story until now I would say, 70% of FW's sufferings were done by JL which is really discouraging...
The system giving him servants(or followers, whatever you want to call them) who is subservient to him is somewhat insulting.The sect leader lady completely lost her personality.I feel like that three potentially strong female characters just devolved onto mindless followers... That being said I did like the outline of the story although it dis feel astonishingly similarly to a novel I have read before. But I am reserving judgement since I have read only 72 chapters. I did think it would have been better for him to just sell wine since he is an aspiring? wine God but this is good too. Also I feel like the villains are too idiotic and don't have any good information network to understand they are horribly outclassed. I wish they could be a bit more fleshed out and intelligent. There are a lot of cliches and overused plot themes. Hair trigger cannon fodder villains, arrogant females who gets swayed by his looks or power, rich scions who gets won over by the amazing food and wine, greedy experts who wants to snatch MC's possessions, an astonished mob......
The Grammar is not very good for a translated novel but other than that the story is actually quite promising and even though u may not understand what happens at the start it will get clearer at around 10 chapters.
Writing Quality is 4.3/5 from me since the way the author describes things were easy to understand and wouldn't be much problem unless you're such a picky grammar reader.The update's stability is five, considering how the author able to update many chapters on the same day. Looking at the way the story goes fairly smoothly and logically without any hint of awkward development, I guess 4.7 is not a bad rate for the story development. Here's the unique. The MC was a gambler, but unlike any other gambler, he is surprisingly the opposite of a bad gambler, a good gambler with family being the centre of his life. He was bold enough to leave his job/hobby as a gambler to make his family's relationship goes well.The MC's wife also quite mischievous and tend to prank MC and her son. There is this moment where the MC's wife also broke out in tears upon knowing the MC's source of money was entirely came from gambling. This shows how MC's wife is another human being and not an expressionless robot, unlike in some novels.The MC's son was designed like a child of his age. Full of curiosity, childish, and reckless.The author has described the world background perfectly at the start of the novel. Hence, 5 stars from me <3
The story has a unique beginning that we dont see alot in story's it shows creativity of the author I recommend to read this it's really good so far even though it has a system the mc dosent have a OP start where he can rule the world and it shows that he isn't cocky.
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Chapter 1 is promising! As always, GD delivers a quality story! Who would thought Death would die? Lol! I can't wait for more chapters! Cheers to death!