It’s an ok novel. Atleast better than most in this platform. Reviewed at ch 200Personal Score - 7/10MC - vagrant cultivator turned serious loyal soldier. His past life is only significant at the start and with regard to his combat/survival skills. He’s still OP though with edgy/cringe-y moments.Side Characters - generally bland and predictable but inoffensive. They’re not really vital to the story as almost everything is dependent on the intervention of the MC.Romance - it’s cute but it was too abrupt and became predictable. MC also suddenly had a goofy personality when it did happen which is kinda weird given the prior chapters leading to that. But he then switches to a cold and uptight personality at will.World Building - the world is grand, vast, and curiousity inducing. Mechas are a thing but not really a big part of combat as of yet which is weird because it was the focus at the start. It’sPlot - It’s ok. Nothing ground breaking. Imagine a Starcraft Terran novel but with cultivation levels. One criticism is that the plot is too MC-centric as mentioned earlier.Dropped at 200 because I’m really not a fan of the loyal and uptight soldier trope. Seems too propaganda-ish to me. Also the plot became uninteresting to me as it everthing became a “serve your country” plot. But it’s good though so give it a shot.
One of my favorite novels. I love the story development and characters. I only wish author would update more frequently
The book seems very promising so far. Very deeply thought out. Very interested how the story will develop as the idea of having Imp slowly learn things is nice
"Carl enough! Look at this." The doctor showed me a picture that I was very familiar with.
"Hello there," said a Doctor while waving his hand to me.
"Rong'er, why are you staring at the mirror? Are you really fine?" Asked Tu Hao while looking at his dazed daughter.
Omg your story is so relatable it really touches me down to my soul
"The next target's a WayneTech Facility," Robin says, shocked as the camouflaged Bioship comes to a slow just outside the building. "In theory," now he has Superboy's attention, the clone can hear the emotions raging through Robin's voice. "it's system software could be used to hack the-" he cuts himself off.
And in the other side of his eyes, he also saw the sharp glances of Raynare and Irina's that were sending in their direction as they watched Asia hanging on his arm.
Of the gentle flower which is the princess of Stricc, who was the only one that could tame the magical beast!
Coming to a jolting stop, she and the blur tumbled to the ground outside of the building they'd been in. Rolling to a stop, she looked to see Pietro lying on the ground, clutching his stomach as more blood seeped from the wound.
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