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I shouldn’t be impatient and should follow the MC determination BUT!This novel need more recognition!Sure, 1 million is a lot but for me, it’s not…
well Hello I just noticed your novels in webnovel too ? keep making this master piece. its one of few that makes my day more enjoyable .
It's refreshingly new... kinda.We seen the card thing before but this improves on that. The MC is the one of two that knows of the cards. This also has fleshed out the rules the cards go by.The world is also different as it shows that the MC isn't the only strong person/group around.Long story short: You can tell there is effort here. Thought-out effort
Description feel like : i like this women. She mine. Ohh there.. Her too. Wait.. Who beside her? I like too..Am i wrong? Not read yet. Just want to write review for description. Heheh
No hate for the author but this is my honest review..Imma start with the character design.Other than MC, we dont really know about other character.We dont know if Mc has any family.We dont know if he is in a guild.We dont know a lot of thing to be short and im sure this can be solve with more chapter.(As currently writing this review,there are 13 chapter).So im giving this a 2 out of 5 stars.Secondly would be the worldbuilding.There is nothing explain about the world Mc live in.So i give it 1 out of 5 stars.Again there are not enough chapter as of currently to evaluate.After that would be story development.According to the author pace,except for a few force plot (such as Mc sense of guilt or the college girl awakening),the story are really solid.The only problem would be not enough chapter to evaluate the novel.I give this 4 out of 5 stars.Next would be the writing quality.Im not some kind of writer or any kind of figure that would put a heavy account on writing cus for me as long as it is readable than it is good enough.I give this 5 out of 5 stars.Lastly there is update stability.There is only 13 chapter so the update is frequent.All i hope is author would not suddenly decide to go MIA when the novel reach chapter 70 - 80++.I give this 5 out of 5 stars.
I am a new reader of this npvelso I saw the synopsis and read some reviews here. Then i gave it a try. Its really good with the world building and character formation. A lot of words in a chapter too. I enjoyed it very much. But I want more action and drama here
First I have to thank the author for the fantastic work. Your book is my every day highlight.This book and its predecessors are a peace of its own. An MC who knows what he has to do and has a clear goal. The road he has to walk is long and burdensome. But every step he has to walk is essential for his goal. And I like it.Thanks for your patience and time, dear author.
Verei, heid ler a historia e espero nao ficar decepcionada, oh, vamos ver Verei e espero gostar da historia, e days personagens da historia sim espero.
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