Dear Author, I'm a big admirer of your writing! After reading your book, I was blown away by your talent. I have some ideas on how to take your book to the next level and expand its readership. Would you be willing to listen to my feedback and suggestions?
The writer obviously kept viewing his book over and over again to get that many views tho I haven't read it(No synopsis if it's shit would have wasted my time)Nevertheless I would give it a 5 star since it manged to catch my attention
Writing style? Check! Character design? Check! World Background? Check!This- I can't speak right now like I'm at chapter 3 and it is giving me the chills somehow like I keep wondering how his life as Arlon will go! Like it is so scary if i were in his shoes!sadly I'm only at chapter 3 because I'm at school and also to add suspense ofcourse for myself, and one last thing? also because it only has 25 chapters so far and I don't want to end up in a cliff hanger so I will be reading 2 chapters later, 2 chapters tomorrow, and 2 chapters so on and on!wait I don't know why I'm telling yall about my decision but what I am sure about it that this- is really, Really- Good!!! If you are interested in fantasy novels that is laced with mystery about the protagonist's fate! this.one.is.for.you!Please continue updating, and fast! (No pressure :)) because I have a feeling that this will be a peak of a novel!per chapter I will also add comments for the author to see my support and so ya guys better support them too, because this is really great!I kept repeating good and great I know but it's just so good and great! ??Anyways, definitely give this a shot and for those who are hesitating to read this? don't be, it's not like it's gonna eat you....right?
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This story has some good pacing so far, and the introduction of the characters is going well. Long as it keeps the pace up, introduces the characters properly, and the world building comes together as it is now, it will turn out to be a pretty good novel series.
I enjoy all of your chapters my dear.. nice story line and I like the way u described your scenes.... Honestly am hooked on your book???????keep up the good work author!!
Hi I'm Jessica and I find this book really interesting and I really like reading it. keep up the good work author
Hello, this is the author of the book. First of all, thank you for taking the time to read it—I really appreciate your support!It’s been a while since I last sat down to write, and I’m excited to share this new series with you. To be honest, I hadn’t planned to publish this book due to my busy schedule. Currently, I’m working two shifts, which leaves me with very little time to write.That said, I already have over 50 draft chapters, so I decided to release them, even with minimal editing. Please excuse any grammatical errors or rough patches in the writing.My other book is also on hiatus because the drafts are quite messy, and I haven’t had the chance to clean them up for publishing. If you’d like this series to continue, I’d really appreciate your support—leaving a comment is the best way to let me know you’re reading and enjoying the story.The protagonist of this book is named Lucias, and if you've read my other work, you might notice similarities to another character of the same name. The story starts off slowly, but I hope you’ll bear with me as I continue to update and release new chapters.The more support I receive, the more motivated I’ll be to release chapters regularly, though writing often means sacrificing two hours of sleep! Your comments really help keep me going.If you have any questions, feel free to drop them below, and I’ll do my best to respond. Thank you again for your time and support!
Wow nice book, good talent and you deserve more reader's and reviews, I will like to share some tips to boost your book performance, Are you open to that ?
The fighting scenes are so well explained it was surreal, I like how he explained the expression the way he stabed and his system is well defined including penalties. the world building is also good it was good read for me I hope author dwell more on character building and continue it..