Despair512
First chapter had really been exhilarating. I'll read more and come for a second review. Good work author!
it is very good need some more editing but overall it is very good so far. one of the best sci-fi books I've read on here.
everything is perfect, the story is just amazing , good work
Great story author keep up with the good work big ups .. Just please try updating a little more one chapter a day plus other days nothing it's killing me personally ?
I've been waiting for a long time for a story like this and this one lives up to each and every one of my expectations. I'm really looking forward to seeing how the author develops his story in the future.
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Plot: ★★★★★ (5 stars)Update stability: ★★★★★ (5 stars)Main character: ★★★ (3 stars)Side characters and character development: ★★★★★ (5 stars)World-building: ★★★★★ (5 stars) Keep going author , one of the best novels that i ve ever read deserve 4.8 or 4.7.Please just be sure to keep the quality like that and dont update so fast and rune your novel .
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Woooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwweeeeeeee I love the latest chapter!! Just finished 7 and I had to give support. Poor Umeko!! She just keeps getting mixed up in bullshit and I can't stop reading about it
Author's Warning: This novel isn't for the holy ones or mommy's boy... {18}.This is like the combination of Harem, xxx smut, Op ASF Mc, action and system.. A bit common tropes but mixed differently... check it out and share... thank you!
Is Moxy in the harem or is she just someone the MC has fun with?
The storyline is good. It's the type of book I'd read but author consider editing more before posting
