The Illegitimate Who Devours Weapons

Fix the missing chapters and get your story straight until then consider this droppedNo communication is sometimes worse than liesFillerfillerfillerfullerfuuuuuuu

I give this a 1 star just to balance the Idiot that gave this Novel a 5 star rating while saying in his Review that this novel is at best a 2,5

So this is a prequel from "the portal of wonderland" and shared universe with "a record of Mortal's Journey To Immortality".................

this novel cant even reach the mediocre standard just from chapter 1 you will see a huge and unexplainable plothole no matter what the author says in later chapters you cant cover this plothole the mc is an ordinary person before he reincarnatesafter he reincarnates he acts dumb and changes completely but nobody suspects anything?then he thinks he became some medical god who can make a potion just because he knows some of the materials they used plus adding his own materials to "remove" the side affects with no fking recipe nothing then he thinks that because the mc who will definitely kill him hasnt done anything to him yet he wont do anything back either plus the quality of the writing is bad and the conversations like people with mental issues talkingall of this make the novel trash material i didnt even bother to read the second chapter nor should you

This is a fan fic and yet it is locked at 20 or 21 chapters? What?                                                                        

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