BrinBru
Hey there, it’s your friendly neighborhood author.
And yes, I’m shameless enough to give myself five stars. ✨
This is my second novel and my entry for WSA 2022.
I hope y’all support me!?✨
Also, constructive criticisms are allowed?
Turn your brain off and read type of novel. MC is annoying and stupid. World background: Chinese young master.Character design: Chinese young master.Story development: Chinese young master.Simp MC gives rise to the thought of strangling him to death.
Great writing quality! You can easily tell what the writer is trying to convey without hassle.Stability of updates? could be better, but everyone has their own paceStory Development; Full Immersion! You're in it from the first chapter, so it's much better than some others I won't mention. Giving credit where it's due...Character design is flawless.World background is unique.Just a bit slow on the release.
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I find the story very interesting, even though I have no idea where it is going lol. I like the background and the multiple POV as it makes me see things from everyone's perspective. Skylar seems very interesting, and I can't wait to learn about his past. I recommend you put in an axillary chapter explaining a few things so new readers won't be lost.
"She's always so Indifferent to me... Despite being married for three days, we have not once held hands? I don't even know if she's my bride or my ANCESTOR!"the first few chapter is beautifully done. i got stuck just after reading the first 10chapters,After reading 60Chapter, it contain many aspect to view it as harem but still, the female lead is against the MC flirting with another women.
Please don't drop it
I dont even want to write a real review because I know it'll just be deleted ?????????????????????????????????????????????????
Finally found a great story after a long time. Powerful and interesting protagonist. The author also gives many surprise. Like how a friend got a in heritage instead of the protagonist.
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Good story with great world building. I really like MC, his character, behavior and decisions.
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