Everything is very good….except the use of western name.Author, if u don’t know the gender of a first name, don’t know how to use first name and surname, and even mistaken one character for another, just don’t use them and keep to eastern names.In first chap i thought it was a mistake but I am at 120 chap and it is the same. There is at least 1 mistake by chap. It seems to me u don’t care about ur story.
