Oi editor, I think in the ch.483 - Jiangning City, I don't think there were 140 million population in the city! Even the most populated city in the world just in about 30 million population. Please fix it. Bye!
When will it finish?
I’m on chapter 2 at the moment and so far it seems interesting but the translation when it mentions the MC step mother it would switch back and forth between him/her he/she and since this story revolves around Alphas, betas, and omegas where it doesn’t matter if they’re man or women, as long as they’re an omega then they can get pregnant so it doesn’t help with my confusion, so I’m confused is the step mother a women or a man? Cause one moment it would mention the stepmother a she then the next it would change to he. I don’t know if this is cause of the translator mistake or what but so far thats the only thing that’s bothering me.
chapter 70 plus? when did irene get together with the mc? i thought she is drowning in a cave somwhere?
Pancake-chan never dropped a novel, don't stop! I'm rooting for you!
50 chapters. The hero gets dumber with each chapter (and don’t say that he is still young, etc. (he sometimes gives out strong ideas and actions and he is not a virgin, just stupid)), the very idea of cutting and pasting is not new, but sometimes reading - Interesting.
i personally wanted to rate this piece of ///// zero rating and please do not waste your time reading this. I hope you use your precious time elsewere
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the name is basketball myth: super guard . you can find it in mtlnovel, it has about 1488 chaps. good job on the editing man. but do give the source in the description before people starts to question you.
If the author of this novel was 12 years or younger: Great concept! You are an intelligent young author with good ideas. Please develop your writing and let us enjoi your works in the future.If the author is older... at least 16 or more.... ARG!!!Usually I like this kind of story - Beast-Taming, getting Stronger, a system for adds. However, in this story it is presented so plainly and... arg!-First of all, the language, even if machine-translated, is kindergarden-level.-Szene-Descriptions are awfull in their composition, especially the fights.- I am only at chapter 14 or so, but the plot is jumping and jumping ahead, with sequenses and szenes other novels would make 3-12 chapters for AT LEAST, which here are implemented, rushed down and... not usefull at all.- Power-jumping is the next thing. Just a few sentences ago something was explained to only work at higher level, MC does it earlier... with no explenation for HOW! It was just neccessary - NOT!- Dumb characters, which are so 2D, that I fear they could degrade to 1D with a little less care...- The resoning of the MC and the characters is another thing and... "Ah, he is doing somthing dangerours... but he is MC... he says he wants to do it... how could I forbid it, even thought I am responssible for his safety?" WHAT KIND OF LOGIC LEVEL IS THAT????ARg! I m frustrated, because the idea behind the story seemed good and interesting, but - I am not sure if that is TOO hard - the author makes nearly EVERY mistake an author can make in the development at the beginning AND seems not to care about his own naming of techniques, at all..Sorry, I am frustrated....
I have read till the most recent chapter and I am really liking it right now. The story is really interesting and the characters are very likable. If you are checking it out, let me just tell you, the story only gets better not worse.
Ah, yes. Sentou Maids, a man's romance. (I still don't get why I still get frustrated after chapter 38 tho, probs 'cuz the memories thing which only joined him midway, and me being uncomfortable about something in which I can't describe... the mc yet not the mc thing hurts my smol breyn. Aleshia such a great waifu, umu.)