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The story is great but the author writes in a twisty, jumpy manner that is extremely hard to follow sometimes. It’s like starting at the end of a chapter then being told the middle and having to just figure out the start. He also says the mf “speaks” when he is clearly thinking to himself as what he says has no baring on the people around him in the scene. Overall, it’s a good story and a great one if the author can fix some of these issues.
love triangle & dramatic ...............
Probably one of my favorites on here, but in later chapters it gets extremely drawn out. Like 6 chapters of doing the business back to back to back then followed by a chapter or 2 of story movement followed by individual dates for another several chapters. I need storyline movement to keep me interested.
Its started really good hope it doesn't end up making averyone except mc stupid and i also like little world background excited for new chapters
The MC is the type of character that falls directly into my "move on to next novel" territory. My score is unfortunately based on my experience of having just read Solo Levelling & Rise of a Porter and I really enjoyed them. I commend the hard work but the moments where something pivotal is about to happen so it immediately cuts to a different scene and the slow pace was very jarring so I only made it to chapter 23. I'm the type of person where if nothing has grabbed my attention and I'm up to chapter 20? It's definitely a no
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Great book unfortunately it was dropped or never picked up. So many gems fall to the wayside....its a pity........................... really ....................
#ActingWeak ? ? ? ?Umm? your Maxed Out.. While everyone Else is still Level 1..And you need to act weak? Why?
From when I started reading to where I am now, I would say that the concept of this story and the development is very good. The only thing holding this down would be that there are a lot of grammatical errors. So much so that I have to spend time trying to figure out what the authors means in some cases. While this takes away from the story, it isnt enough to stop me from reading this book! One advice I would give the author for improvement is obviously learning the english language, as well as trying to deepen the plot of the story! A couple examples I have from other books ive read would be that instead of the main character going through an event and then magically getting the ability to not register pain or care about pain, they make it so that the event is super discriptive and made it so that something happened to where the main character got used to pain. They describe it like, “Suwu felt like his skin was being flayed alive, his muscles being streched around his body, trying to compresses his bones into fine powder! His organs felt like they inflated so much that they were trying to rip apart his body to run away.” That type of discription. Anyway I just wanted to give my opinion because I enjoyed your story and can’t wait for you to devlop as a writer!
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Amazing thing, the events were fun, the character of mc is still volatile, mc is interesting especially to make humans a meal, but he must continue to drink blood, it is more useful than killing and getting a little strength because of the ring, and in order to hide evidence of it by burning or melting the corpses with some Solvent potions, good luck