Became a Traitor in an Academy

I like the buildup of your story. Massive!!

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You have a good idea. I feel like I am not in the story. I am suggesting that you try to show instead of telling what characters are doing. here is websitehttp://***.wright.edu/~david.wilson/eng3830/creativewriting101.pdf

This is easily one of my top 3 novels i've read on this site, nothing much to say besides its amazing in every way shape and form. Good stuff author!

I swear to goddess of explosion, Megumin - sama that I had read this before but as webtoon...I forgot the title but the mc also stuck inside tutorial place for a long time until he can't even uplvl in next world because his lvl is low but exp and stat is flying off the roof...But this is bad. I remember that the webtoon is quite interesting but this one is.. Hurm...

A very fun and interesting take on the usual "Lord Game" format that many chinese webnovels use, for once the MC is not rash, racist or stupidly overpowered and not everything goes according to plan, forcing the MC to adapt and overcome the obstacles with creative solutions rather than just luckily finnding a skill or item that would just perfectly solve his problems. My only complaint would be the intelligence level of all the young masters in this novel so far, it makes me doubt they are capable of tying shoelaces without help.