Getting started,read a the first chapters to be posted, and it looks promising. Perfect plot and character development.Well meshed in the contemporary history of the crusade. If you're facinated by Knight Templars, crusades, clash of religions, civilization. You got to try out this novel
Synopsis is very good but actual novel is wrong.
I really want to see this
too much talking when fighting, and I dont really like that, poor grammar, and lacks of information.I could only read until the "kidnapping of lily, by squall" chapter, because it was written so poorly. Without update stability, this would only be rated 2 overall. But because I didnt really finish it, I'd give it a 5 for Update Stability. Prob gonna comeback in the future, but for now, Im just gonna read another one.
I don’t get it, the author should have written this book as if it had taken place in china not america 1: a marriage is not a marriage in America until it is consummated2: the wife’s last name is changed to that of the husband3: and if the family is an old school family like most of the old rich families then the husband is in charge of the family and the wife has to listen to the husband
Starts off extremely predatory, and then barely focuses on that aspect, but in the story it makes sense so not an issue yet considering pace of story and current number of chapters. Translation is trash and in the later chapters seems worse than MTL. Unless the original author was just very dumb. A lot of things are very unclear, the thought processes of some characters are inconsistent, but the story is progressing at a reasonable pace… kinda. Everyone is still in mortal stage, and foundation stage cultivators are considered a supreme fighting force. Not sure how well planned out the growth of the story is, but pretty solid start if you turn off your brain and just read the story. Also I think she is a crossdresser or thinks she’s a guy, but is a girl. You’ll know when you get there, because of translation it’s not easy to confirm
Hi author here, after I hit the 100 chapter I told you guys that I was going to make a new review to answer the questions that I got in the past chapters and to clarify the things you mentioned or asked about .First, the MC 's character: It is really too early to judge his character. Reading some comments that I got made me think sometimes that some of you don’t even understand the concept of trauma and its repercussions on one's life let alone a kid's life .We are talking about a kid who saw his parents do some despicable things all his life( sacrificing animals, suspicions of murdering his aunt, and sacrificing him in a cult).Literally, all this is mentioned in the first 4 chapters, so don’t worry about spoilers , of course, he will not act as he should be .Second: The editing part, I went through all the past chapters, and now I am in chapter 40, so don't worry I will keep uploading the chapters and editing at the same time .third: Romance / Harem : I prefer to not answer that question because we are still in early chapters and I really can’t say if there is or not because that might make some readers leave reading or not read at all, all you need to know is that the mc is going to grow slowly to be stronger, smarter, more intelligent.Anti-hero: Well aren’t we all in love with anti-hero characters?Pace: warning : don’t expect the mc to turn evil in the first chapters.Last: well, I recommend reading until chapter 46 and judging it .If you guys have any questions, remarks, ideas, or complaints, write them down in this review .and yeah without your support guys this work was going to be buried under my pillow, so thank you for giving me a chance to bring it to life .
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This whole novel is trash I don't care if u delete my comment because u author know full well I am right I don't even know how this made it in the top 100
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I love the MC and other characters are actually living breathing people with their own problems and personality. The world settings is still been revealed as the novel is still at its initial stages overall it has potential but my only problem is the Romance I'd rather have no romance than forced romance the MC has never had a good opinion of Qin Yan she's beautiful and talented but that's it countless other females in the sect possess the exact same qualities but the MC has never been shown as one chasing after beauty. Yet she gave him an ultimatum with even asking for his opinion . Yet the next moment he has her name been mentioned he couldn't help but send her a letter ???????? Pls Don't ruin this great novel with bland tasteless romance . A great novel is not defined by the number of jade skined beauties chasing after the MC or by the number of girls the MC has slept with . Pls author don't go down that road...