DetachedDreamer
Reading the comments, no one really talk about he creating the world. Did he create one? I wanna read it myself at first but get annoyed that the first conflicts is literally about girl...
I can agree with you there bro
Can you read? I never said comments don't give good recs, I said that if I listenned to some cimments then I wouldnt have read some of MY favourites. They then asked me for some of my favs and I gave them some, granted the ones I gave dont have alot of hate comments some of a lot of the ones I like do.
So, there's not even the slightest possibility of this ever coming back?
Nah
I dont think this is the one u r searching for
is it true?
Thank u for this
Imma put it on pause, chap 980.
-this book had the potential to be 5 stars. The author strong points are :making likeable characters, balanced power scale and overall interesting powers, very good humor(plot kinda basic and linear tho). The characters are so well written and interesting that mc isn’t even top 3.
- why is this the biggest fumble in the history of novels? Author randomly decides to adopt a “system” even tough he is perfectly capable to write and doesn’t need any crutch to progress his novel, in fact, the system messes up the whole story and adds tens of gigantic plot holes that leave a bad aftertaste while reading it. Its literally self sabotaging, actually wicked work on his part.
-also the romance is unfortunately bad… yeah ik its a slow burn and shi, but slow burn has to make sense, u cant progress one chap and then the next one ur back to square one. I feel like bro added romance only so he could fit a few more snarky jokes in.
Several Chapters are missing in the 100s chapters
Having finished the novel, I can't honestly recommend it to anyone. The romance isn't good, the story isn't good, its 'systems' aren't attractive to mech fans or cultivation fans on either side. Tonnes and tonnes of worthless face-slapping filler chapters. Godawful villains. The author is incredibly inconsistent in pretty much every aspect of the story. The last third of the actual story and all that built up to that was instead a single chapter dumping the author's plot outline notes so he could get on with a shitty epilogue and write a new novel. 4/10 at best, don't bother.
Its missing a few chapters from the start
Then,Mu Tangxue lied and swear to struck by lightning if she tell any lies. Me. :Why she not struck by lightning yet?!Writer:(Smirked)Obviously this novel will end if she struck by lightning...no more evil girl and everyone will be happy
