by reading this novel, i learn more how to convey or tell the world building. Your story telling really good. I love them overall, can't wait to see the update! good luck author!!
I think it's great. Not too simple, but not too complicated ................................................................................
This novel is pretty damn good. It's giving me a lot of Trash of the Count's family vibes but I like this one more. The MC reincarnates in the body of a total trash, who is a prince of the nation they are in and was exiled into a village for trying to rape the archbishop granddaughter.Now, I know it looks like it but it isn't a kingdom building novel(at least not until now).Characters are pretty likable, good comedy and interesting action scenes. The only complaint I have is that the trial reading ended in a big cliffhanger and this novel doesn't seem to have much chance, because the other necromancer novel is doing way better. The thought of having to wait months to read this again saddens me a lot.
Good story,bt the characters involved should be more as it would bring more excitement, overall a nice plot with thrills jumping at each moment
@instagram Nathanisontheway4I gave Focus a 5/5 in everything but writing quality. It isn't that I make any major errors, but it seems like I can never re-read through a chapter I've uploaded without wanting to pull my hair out because I made a typo here, or spelt something wrong there. But! if you can forgive an author for constantly spelling dao, doa, I'm sure Focus will be something you enjoy for a long time to come!Aside from my mistakes, Focus has a lot of strengths. I believe the world and lore are all very interesting. There are countless clans and sects, and each has a unique history with each other that pushes the story forward. In terms of character development, Chen rui straight forward as you can get, but it's clear he himself . I also try to give every important character a unique backstory of note that explains their motivations and personality.For stability of uploads, that's something you never have to worry about :) I've been uploading at least 2 chapters a day for the better part of a month now, and the only times I uploaded a single chapter was back when I didn't split my 4000 word chapters in multiple parts. You'll have something to come back to enjoy everyday :)As for the story itself, the second volume will speak for itself. The first was an introductory arc, where we introduce the mc, who he is, his back story, and his first female companion. The second, however, truly delves into the lore of the Focus verse. We have mystery, backstabbing, and plenty of face slapping.I hope you'll all enjoy Focus as much as I enjoy writing it everyday! :)
Its amazing so far im .sad that nothing new has been posted I really hope this wasnt dropped because I am really enjoying it so far.
still reading keep up the good work. some of the writing quality needs work but it is good and thanks for the chapter's........................................................