This is complete bs, how tf did this got pick when it has lower fans than "My Learning Has Mutated". The difference is about 125 fans, 385 for dis and 510 for "My Learning Has Mutated". Absolute bs, "My Learning Has Mutated" is better than dis garbage."My Learning Has Mutated" is garbage too, but this one is on another level of garbage
The author doesn't seem to know what kind of story this should be.So, imagine a cultivation world. Is it a cultivation story? No, the main character dies. But they are reborn in a different world. Oh, it's an isekai? No, they return to their first world through a VRMMO. Hey, that's the title of the story! But they also get a system, with an AI, and nobody else has that. But it's not really a system story either.Many threads are brought up, but abandoned before they can do anything interesting. The game prevents the MC from using their prior cultivation techniques. Oh, but there might be workarounds (through the shadow clone, or eaching others). Is the MC going to do something clever to get their old techniques back? Nope, once he gets the system that restriction goes away. Nevermind then.He wants to take his human-form snake followers and take over the criminal underground. Sounds exciting! Just kidding, he dumps them on the side of the road. I guess the snakes are off in the interesting story, while we just follow the terrible MC around.Everything is like this. Oh, there's an annoying girl at school that the MC keeps rejecting but she won't get the message. Just kidding, the MC totally loves her now. Let's get married on the first date.My point is, there are deep problems with the story. The author often retcons their own story (protip: rather than add stuff to the *past*, you can actually go back and edit those chapters when those events were the *present* and put your changes there), So the foundation is constantly shifting. And that's not even touching on the many grammatical and other mistakes. I suspect the author is not very experienced in English. But even if an editor fixed these problems, the story problems would remain.The premise is interesting, but other stories have used this same premise much more effectively. The earlier chapters are OK, but there is a drop in quality later.This story can best serve as a rough outline for what the author really wants, but they have to figure that out. Finish this story, but don't drag it out. Then start rewriting it, after you have a firmer grasp of the overall plot.
well 1 star since i believe it will become a racist nationalistic novel later on so heed my advice fellow readers don't read the book and waste ur time
I really came to love this .The mc is quite likeable too .This novel has great potential .Hope you continue this author. ####£¢€¥^°°[[[={}{°°={=€££|`~`π׶=^¥¢£|°
One of my favorite novel. Don't let give up this masterpiece please ;)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
grammar is bad, but i like the story. Please use some kind of grammar app or something like that it is really annoying (sorry for my bad english)
This a rare gem. The story concept while familiar finds it's self being unique not just in concept, but in story telling
What other story sends you in past before building into the future.
Read up to chapter 184 for now.Sadly the MC gets blinded by power. Making 5-year olds from clan work hard. Using public military funds for the growth of his own personal forces and clan. Not only that, but also framing with a death sentence a quite strong loose cultivator who has not done anything wrong except refusing to bow to MC and become his lackey. Maybe in some jungle law cultivation novel that would seem normal, but in this one, there are rules set by a big sect in which families can't murder and plunder weaker families as they please if they don't break the rules and the big sect also made restrains to big families so that loose cultivators and weak families can live rather safely and have an opportunity to grow despite so many things being monopolized. MC's family survived for as many as hundreds of years pretty much only because these rules were in place - despite being in decline, the environment seems to be quite stable and relatively safe, at least for the last 10-20 years there have not been any beast or evil cultivator attacks against them.As it is portrayed, MC does harm to others for no reason, seems like a tyrannical villain and a hypocrite.There was a case where MC stole some families' business and one of the more desperate family head retaliated out of desperation - because the business was too important for him (his fleeting breakthrough opportunity depended on that). MC basically cut their line of income and then made them a scapegoat ,,to scare monkeys". Of course, the family was not some good-hearted family, but hey, it could be solved another way. Especially when, after 50-100 chapters this amount money was nothing in the eyes of MC..When other big guys asked him to join them, they didn't threaten or oppress him or his clan. Even when he refused, they either gave gifts or just dropped the topic. But when MC gets refused, he ,,feels uncomfortable
lots of cliches + endless luck + plot armor + illogical protagonist + formulaic characters + stupid enemies + endless repetition of the same plots = this novel. (English is not my native language)
A real hidden gem among the pile of trash in web novels..amazing story with a realistic ruthless mc..Quality of writing is superb..and I can't wait for more chapters to be released..Highly recommended novel read it and you won't regret
Promising synopsis,But very, VERY poor execution. It's a shame.Reads like a significantly worse version of losing money to be a Tycoon.xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Very unusual story.. Actually this is my first time to read a novel that based on a game.. Very nice fantasy story.. Fighting author.. I want to read more..