ok, i like th MC, and her enviroment, i liked so much the plot. Writing style it's ok, maybe some great praragraf that give me some slow motios vibes when i0m reading it, but it's a nice style. Only thing, give us some hook or some clues, a litle bite lost on where is ti going
First off, I will say that the writing quality of this story is great. They do a lot of things right, and the story has many enjoyable parts. I find myself smiling quite a bit at sections of the story. That said, there are two glaring issues with this story that need to be addressed. First off, the reincarnation aspect of this story is basically pointless. The main character is a human who was born into the body of a dragon, so you'd think there'd be some difference between him and other dragons right? Nope. This MC no different from the others. Thinking like a dragon, acting like one, and is essentially dominated by his dragon instincts like 90% of the time. If you wondering if his human side is ever going to matter, you can safely put those thoughts to rest. He is a sociopath who lovingly plays with his family and then slaughters hundreds of humans with a smile on his face while complaining that it was too easy like all the others. He brings nothing new.In addition to this, it seems like the dragons in this story suffer from brain damage. They preach about keeping balance and how humans are using mana wrong. But they never try to explain anything to them. The dragons constantly complain about this problem as well, but they're causing the very issue they're trying to stop. The dragons also set up a training ground for young dragons to kill humans, but if humans ever win, they get butthurt and go destroy cities completely unrelated to the deaths and say: "Yeah! That's what you deserve!"What's worse is that these dragons think of themselves as wise and intelligent beings. And for the most part, they are. They even go out of their way to collect EXTENSIVE knowledge on specific human kingdoms. Yet somehow they can't grasp these very simple pieces of common sense.
Very good plotline, and nicely written! Thinking of reading other projects of the author. Come on folk, what are you waiting for, go and read it.
Pretty good so far. The main character could definitely be considered evil, but the idea is pretty unique and I would definitely wish to see this novel continued. Maybe he will reform the Dragon Race into a more communal race rather than just a group of individuals. Can’t wait for more. THX.
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The story... What should I say... After the first chapter I was already tempted to drop it but I persisted through all 40 free chapters.My short review would be: the first 15 or so chapters (except for the first ~2) had the ability to make me laugh because of some nice side characters that got me some comical relief. Sadly when the mc moves towards his next target he leaves them behind (like I said: side characters). ⭐????The story is about an OP military male that comes out of prison after a mission and sees his family in peril. Now he's out for revenge. It's the cliche face slapping. He goes around seeking revenge on family after family. Those "esteemed" families feel offended by his actions and his brute force, things escalate and the family gets eradicated. Many things also involve his adopted sister but surprise surprise they are actually in love.You should not that the genre of this novel is magical realism. In general everything seems "normal" but the MC and his strongest subordinates (of course generals from the military) have some cultivation kind of martial arts skills. (MC can crush people with his aura if he for once doesn't decide to beat them up himself.)Character design and development... There isn't any of it really. Mc seems shallow and nowhere like a military person should seem. He has anger and control issues and seems very superficial. There isn't much information about the world background, just that the MC is the almighty and every military person looks up to him etc. There are also loopholes in general that aren't really explained (yet). Like he was framed by his business partner that landed him in prison for 5 years and then a strong guy picked him up and like this he somehow got into the military where he now has unimaginable high achievements etc but at the same time it was said he went to military for a top secret reason and nobody knew about this or that he was in the military before jail time.If you're searching for a short break from your current novels but don't want to start a complete new one that you have to finish eventually because it's too good, the first few chapters of this novel might be just right (if you like cliche face slapping and can bare with not so deep characters). You definitely won't get attached. If you want something worth your coins... Better not.I think it's kinda sad because the general plot could be a pretty good face slapping novel if done perfectly. Sadly the author lacks the ability.
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Just no.You'll lose a lot of brain cells reading this
This story keeps you hooked from start to finish! A wild ride from the beginning the author creates a world you can get lost in. Told from the mind of the main character, the reader gets a window into the thoughts which keeps you engaged and invested in discovering the story of the main. 10/10 would read again!
I rarely read stories like this but I really like this one. Maybe because it's been awhile that I've read something like this that got me quite emotional all of a sudden lol. Anyways, I really enjoyed it. Highly recommended! ❤
This is the author's shameless review! If you guys find any mistakes, just comment on them and I'll fix it in a day. Thanks for reading! Also, if you guys have any questions, just reply to this post and I'll answer them as early as possible, I just won't reveal any spoilers.(Again, I know, it's the exact same as my brother's, I'm just too lazy to create a new one.)