The author pat his own back on this one. ?So far I have only read it to chapter 57 and I am not impress. I have a lot of patience with grammatical error and mispelling because I know that this is translated on a language that is not local to the author but my man, if you are shooting to make money on a language that is not familiar to you at least use a google to check your grammar. The errors are so blatant that it will drive you nuts! One more thing, I thought asian are good at math? WHY does the calculations on your novel so out of whack?! If you dont know how to add just make it vauge amount like aprroximately, or almost or better yet just dont add anymore. You got the nerve to grade your own work 5 star? Seriously? Fix your errors then I will definitely agree with you. Your stories carry a great potential to become something great but you need to have consistency with your grammars, character persona, and dont do math if you’re not good at it.
I commend the the author for the time spent in crafting character design and world background. The descriptions were all too vivid for anyone not to understand the story. Most of the story contained just the descriptions of things that Vee did to get stronger and less on conversations with other people. As much as she wants to develop on her own, the road to the top is never easy. That's why I think she needs one friend who'll always be on her side. Dern is annoying, I'm not Vee but even I know that. Very thrilling story but I only felt that at the earliest chapters with her brother and when she was still around people.
The Author TurtleMaster finishes her book Incubus's Blood, but after doing so and thinking she's finished, she's visited by someone most unlikely. Asmodeus. He appears and murders her best friend Jonathan, right before forcing her to reincarnate as his son named Aster.This is her story as the 2nd Incubus. And the first year of her reincarnation is full of psychological tormention, obsessive love and heartbreak, and recovery before she can even get her mind straightened, all while hating the one, Asmodeus who did this to her. she resents him and becomes a Demon just like him maybe even worst.But after she prepares for a battle 2 years from the start and how she's going to survive it, all she wants to do is survive and get these people that come around her are just insane and she's looking for just the normal.[Currently at the start of Volume 3~]
i love this story wayyy too much i reread sometimes just to experience certain chapters again. amazing story plots, amazing fleshed out characters, fantastic world building with lore behind it and would definitely recommend reading and the amount of times i physicaly reacted to some scenes its just so good.its not some overpowered mc with cheat skills, no systems with level ups, not some harem with plastic characters, its serious when it needs to be, funny when it needs to be and so wholesome which can flip to grusome. its the adventure of these characters in a foreign world that has avatar the last airbender vibes but with isekai tones. the narration sometimes gets sassy and just mocks certain things in the story making it a really fun read.by far the best thing are the characters. the main four are so entertaining to watch interact. fumekos the cutest tsundere istg , Jotou the protag whos flawed yet perfect. hotaru the moral compass. And then, my favourite main character asobi, is utter chaos in every sense of the word. the fight scenes in this are just, chef's kiss. there is not TOO many since the writing is more suited for a longterm adventure and places importance on the characters and the plot but when they happen, omg its satisfying. the little details, the way each person fights differently, you can really feel the pain when someone gets injured or the WATCH OUT feeling when someone is about to get hit.its an amazing read imo and an experience. it dips to depression and trauma and then suddenly there are ducks shooting beams of light, some gory fight scene with practical magic and elements then theres a cute wholesome yuri scene that makes my heart flutter. idk what else to say except, fantastic job.
I just want to tell the author that PLEASE SPACE THE BIG PARAGRAPHS THEY ARE HEADACHE INDUCING AND ARE HARD TO READ.Also, I just saw the first couple of chapters
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Patient and smart mc. The goldenfinger is not too overpowering. It is rara to see such a complete book. A breath of fresh air within the eastern novels.
Few chapters yet i am hooked in this story already! The ancient times value the strength of the man but this story is different. I will follow the adventure of the two swordswomen.