i enjoyed reading this book it's very nice
There are parts of the story that are well thought out and have a unique take on the cultivation shstem that differs from other stories. And i have no issue with them being able to fight stronger people, but at times it they can utterly destroy someone nearing the peak of a realm, but then a few days later absolutely struggle to fight someone at the same power. I haven’t read with the updates, as in keeping up with chapter releases. But reading through at once, it feels like the story is rushed and isn’t fully developed. A lot of things aren’t really explained or given background. It also seems that over 80% of females in this story look absolutely the same except hair/eye color.I know this sounds like i despise the story, but i truly don’t. I think the setting and the story itself are good, but a lot of potential is missed out on and lack of variety/creativity in characters. i.e. busty women with big butt… literally all of them and given the same body description.
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Hey, shameless self reviev,The book is great, read it.The story follows Captain Jack, his daughter Maya and their crew on the long and oftentimes difficult journey through the void.
Friendly notice: English is not my first/main language and as such I'm not that great at it. If dear readers notice any grammatical errors or dear readers have an interesting suggestion. Please do let me know.
the idea of the story, the plot, and the world background make this story awesome to read but the writing quality become so bad coz so much mismatch naming and inconsistency in using one name. hope in the next chapter it will get better. keep it up
At need time of this review I am at chapter 385. so far, I am really loving this book. The apocalypse piece mentioned in the title is not super relevant to the story at least at this time. it's more post-apocalyptic. The main male lead is as described he is definitely Op, but not in a way that he doesn't experience growth. he is swiftly gaining harem members. I really have almost no complaints about this story. it's really awesome and I recommend it to anyone that likes a harem. it is unique and does not feel like something you've read a thousand times. Read it!
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Great novel... Hoping it gets picked up....................................................................................................
The storyline is uniquely similar to a few I have seen but not quite seemes as tho the MC is an orphan who's worlds shifts and reborn in the game simulation if I am not wrong.. I don't play games.. U have explained things clearly but at some moments it gets a little confusing.The vocab used is amazing There are very little to almost non grammatical mistakes only found a 'Th' and if I am correct 2-3 words writen wrongly? Hum yesh. The way u express each action taking place gives the reader ig more info on what's taking place.the characters seem to be really self centered a bit and open shamelessly ahem.. And seem to have some issues anger.. To excited with makes me wanna smack them to shut them up but can't but they are over all most seem to have a good chemistry good character base to be exact.Over all its a great story bub demm... Your imagination is out of the league... But over all its truly fascinating.Byebye author-shi it was fun reading :)
this is by far the authors best work :)