Amazing... I definitely want to read more...so far it's only four chapters but those chapters are some of the most thrilling ones I've read about... I have to say I'm hooked on this story... I really want to read more on this bookThe MC looks really interesting and I can't wait to read more on his future escapades... I really like these morally grey types of MC's, not the perfect Gary Stu's or the clichéd villains... I can't wait to see what he will do nextIn my opinion this book is by far the best pick out of the other nine ones and it should really be picked
a very story with grammar that improves as you read, good r18 scenes and Harem, Mc who is no pushover and gets the job done. nice update speed too just wish my fast pass could keep up?
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It is a really good story and it had me on hook all the time it is also an interesting plot it has many things that you will not expect the characters are also really well spoken for
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Overall, an interesting premise. I am sure that with the current situation, there will probably be more stories placed in this timeframe. The quality is pretty good overall, but there were a couple of parts where present and past tense were confusing as well as some dialogue that could be smoothed out. But that can all be fixed with an edit. The MC is pretty well developed, and props to the author for such long chapters. Keep writing!
It is strange that you use powerful jewels in your novel, I think that you are innately smart because you do not need to take ideas from the anime, you are wonderful using your mind to entertain us with your wonderful novel
This is a filler review. I've not actually read the book. I'm doing this for energy stones and trying to boost my lvls so I can read the comics I like with passes without having to spend cash. No offense meant to the aurthor's work or time.
Hello , story is grate but u need to put space`s when someone is talking a litle bit of editing should help ur story alot. And tbh ur idea is grate i like it alot its a fresh new contest for me at least. i need more chapters so i can rate it 5 star but for now its a solid 4. Just edit ur chapters better and everything will be fine.
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