Shards Lost to the Void

Too slow for my taste(dropped)Writing quality and stability of updates are goodStory development is too slow, nothing much happens even after 50 chapters...not much intriguing plot till now, it's all about MC growing up and all background characters are two dimensional. Sometimes character of MC feels a little bland and doesn't have any unique thing that separates him from others(MC is boring, feels two dimensional). After waiting for something to happen which can make me hang on to this story, I am dropping it. Sorry author nothing personal but everything is too slow, I know many say world building is good but I don't see much here. I hope it gets betterIt's not for people who expect a decent or fast paced novels.

The novel will release the fastest on Patreon and the next is this place, I will release the chapter two days faster than this place, but it may need you to pay for it. It was cheap and I think you will like the story.

The storyline is uniquely similar to a few I have seen but not quite seemes as tho the MC is an orphan who's worlds shifts and reborn in the game simulation if I am not wrong.. I don't play games.. U have explained things clearly but at some moments it gets a little confusing.The vocab used is amazing There are very little to almost non grammatical mistakes only found a 'Th' and if I am correct 2-3 words writen wrongly? Hum yesh. The way u express each action taking place gives the reader ig more info on what's taking place.the characters seem to be really self centered a bit and open shamelessly ahem.. And seem to have some issues anger.. To excited with makes me wanna smack them to shut them up but can't but they are over all most seem to have a good chemistry good character base to be exact.Over all its a great story bub demm... Your imagination is out of the league... But over all its truly fascinating.Byebye author-shi it was fun reading :)

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