raye, lycus and Devin be the squad honestly no one can say otherwise. I can't wait for raye, lycus and Devin to start getting stronger and get revenge on the demons. I hope they get way way stronger. I'm hoping allen joins them also he is cool also and meh I don't know what to say about Leon but meh. but with raye getting stronger I hope him a and jarusha confess and become a Couple
The story is readable so far. The only issue is that the chapters are very, very short. It is better to combine several chapters and make it one.This looks like a teenage author who is also new on this platform.
I think you should update more that would be good
I am really liking this story! I hope that you continue it more frequently! I also like that there are now some female characters that aren't super dumb or competitive. That doesn't happen a lot in BL novels, so it was a nice surprise. Can't wait to read more
I love the authors ability to paint a scene in my mind I think even I lack that also the story feels interesting even when not really much is happening the buildup on the first chapter is insane let's see where this goes!but like everything this isn't perfect some parts lack clarity and could be better but other than that solid book ?
Author review here --What can you expect from the first volume? Well, it is a sort of slow start, as the protagonist's system isn't unlocked until about 20~ ish chapters. Keeping that in mind, this is an action-heavy story, so if you're a fan of that, give it a shot !
I'm just a silent fellow who is in the mood to drop good reviews for everyone and I hope everyone also drops a review and a chapter comment too.
did u get money from writing novel or did people read ur Novel what's the benefit of power stone or support
Even though ive been a reader of webnovel for a lot time, I've haven't come across stories that I would consider 'good' much less better then that. But this you guys, is much better than 'good'. While no story can be everyone's favorite, this one hits everything to stand out above the rest. Story is compelling and so many qeustion to keep you going, character that actually feel like people and not a 2D cutout like other webnovels. The only thing that might need some work form my perspective is the editing. Alot of grammar errors but as far as webnovels go, that's the least of people's problems in writing a story most of the time. Anyway, I don't write reviews, but this one is worth it.
The author loves dectective novels can not say anything else just love it and can not wait to read more actually I read it because my brother was doing so and I thought it would be boring but now its the same me who is waiting for next chapter. . .
felix is a angel who deserves love and protectionsunghwa will be his alpha daddy
Good ,now then waiting for for more chapters to update hopefully they write fast and keepthe good quality of the story going for future chapters of the story.