Read up to chapter 50, doing a review now because not sure if I'm going to continue or not. The first 10 chapters I thought were doing well was kind of unique and interesting. But after the Mc ended up in the progenitor body story up to this point has just been kinda boring. Mc is very impulsive and niave but with his age and inexperienced it's a classic trope when novels start with a young normal Mc. Think the main reason I'm not really into the story has to do with the focus now being on setting up the introduction to the characters of the story and a bit of plot development but so far there hasn't been any real moments with the characters that's made me interested or care about them. Guess it's kinda my fault I did come into this expecting more of a b*d*ss Mc due to seeing him being a vampire progenitor in the description. Also not sure if something like Google translate is being used to translate the story or just simple mistakes but there is issues with the writing with he and she being mixed up often and other details. If the novel does end up to your liking one thing is commendable to point out is the author is releasing chapters at a rate you don't see with many novels so you'll have something to read each day.
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complete waste of novel concept. terrible dialog and extreme cringy and not cringy in the cool chuni way.. this novel is complete trash and a disgrace to CCS
Hell yeahhhhh. I'm soo excited that this is getting picked. I've been waiting for months now. Also for those who are complaining, when trial read was introduced webnovel said that it might bring back the novels that didn't get picked before. So please stop rating it low just because this was picked. Cuz there are many including me who are waiting with hope that trial novels which didn't get picked before get picked.Also above thing isn't the reason I rated this 5. It's because I freaking love this novel. Do give this novel a try if you like iras kinda troupe with no racism bs but with video games.I'm really sorry for my grammar guys. I'm pretty sure I fked it up badly.
Recently started reading this and up to chapter 50. Fantastic storyline with very well-developed characters that I eagerly look forward to learning more about as they progress. Great mix of adventure, game play, and humor. Keep ‘em coming - Can’t wait to see what happens next.
Dear God I'm hooked I've read a lot of stories in my day and I can tell this is one fantastic story just started reading it today and couldn't stop in till I was done in for the long hall on this one please don't stop all my power stones coming your way
Stupid story, terrible grammar, reading it equal to torturing yourself. Plus mix up storyline even i dont know whats happening. Overall garbage novel. I mean the point of writing a novel is to let your reader understand what you are writing, the emotion behind it but this **** is useless. I try to force myself reading it but i gave up until chapter 56.
This is really a good novel I found. Please keep writing. I really love your story. I am really immersed with it and wish chapter releases are more frequent. But I will wait.
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You have a potentially good story. I would suggest you write a bit of world-building because I am confused about the setting of the story. is it in China or somewhere else? I would like to see descriptions of places and characters. I also would advise you to look up how to write in the active tone of voice instead of passive. this story has some grammar issues. other than that keep up the good work.
Hey there!Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.