This is becoming more and more incomprehensible. Don't misunderstand, the story is good and nice for me and I feel like I can finish it smoothly if not for its translation errors. Let me elaborate, sometimes names of some things are in english like 'white mountain feather'(not the exact name) and sometimes it would suddenly become) 'baixueya?'(forgot the exact name), aside from this, there are also major error of pronouncing the gender of the character everywhere like a woman becoming 'him' and a man becoming 'her'. All of this are still tolerable for me since I really like the story and the mc is extremely interesting and admirable for me, however, the translation error have been continuing for the last 200 chapters(I'm at more or less c.400). I just can't help but become confused. Like how there would a chinese name suddenly getting inserted which I'm not aware of, or there would be a huge grammatical error in like 10 consecutive sentences. No matter how much I corrected such grammatical errors in my mind, it's just feels so wrong and its taking away the enjoyment I feel when I'm reading this novel T_T
i love this novel almost took me three month to finish reading it i loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee it so much
I don't think I could get enough of this book & it's characters
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So far I’m enjoying it. Hope we get another chap soon.
I'll be honest it's okay, just okay, however if you are someone who usually reads stories about reincarnation into the past then this story will not make sense to you, I mean the major thing about being born into the past is the information on how to proceed with the present, however in this novel the mc knows little to nothing about the past it's as if it was not his life at all, firstly unless he contributed to a major butterfly effect that caused a huge effect on the events that are to happen of which he did not then this means that the author of this novel is not knowledgeable with things pertaining to time travel, I mean the mc should know the events that are happening around him because he has already experienced them however he does not which means his life has changed, how, what happened that caused this major inconsistency with the the timeline? I mean will start with his first case, he says he heard about it in his previous life that means it was originally not assigned to him, what changed that made him get this new case? We are not shown anything in this story, inconsistency 1. Secondly, he does not know his teammates which means he was not assigned to this team previous or the teammates from the past changed, what exactly is happening here? I mean not unless the mc altered the timeline knowingly which should have been revealed to the readers then the time paradox in this story does not make sense at all. All the events are killing the idea that the mc time traveled which in turn will have a major butterfly effect. The butterfly effect should not have come before even the mc altered the course of time. As such for me who picked up because of the time travel reason, I am completely disappointed in this novel.
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Some of the more complicated parts can be hard to understand at times, but the translation is pretty good, and the chapters seem to come out rather consistently which is also definitely a plus.
Thy do be Busting..... Keep up the awesome work. So far I'm loving her system it's unique and cool. The world building is also unique. can't wait to see where this goes
A very promising beginning, the writing is very nice. The female and male lead look lovely ans strong... I look forward the next chapters. ????
It is not every day the universe is destroyed and a new one is made... however, this book had created a scene that surpasses all kinds of sci-fiction that I have read. The plot is beautifully written. The descriptions are right. The twists and turns are what you need to see yourself. I love it!
Great start, I like these type of novels, its seems that, I will have a new favorit story to read , that has a great story line with ?, waiting the upcoming chapters