EL CAMINO DE LA VIDA

Ketis was one of the best characters in the story and could have developed into something great. I always though ves and ketis would be like brothers and sisters since ves once mention wanting a sibling but as usual author wrote ves as a dumb and boring character and didnt explain and stuff and also made ketis like him. Ketis and Ves would have been a great duo and not in love kinda way but more of a sibling kinda way and he would have had someone he could really trust. Kudos to the author for ruining another great character. Great job as always man. You keep your readers proud of you.

if the roles were reversed this novel would have never gone out.The mc is a beta who got raped by some cultivator who used some forbidden technique to forcefully take away his yang energy which wuold have normally crippled him (it won't matter since it says he has a system) then gone away and came later (after 4 years) because she got pregnant (4 daughters), all of this while talking to him like he is trash.Now he takes all this as if nothing and is fine with it. All in all a beta.P.S. before she cripples him he saved her life

So good! I am looking forward to seeing where the story leads!...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................

This actually looks so amazingly unique. Can't wait to see if it just turns into a stupid vrmmorpg, or if it can cement itself as a really good slice of life type book.

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AS OF CHP 38Nothing Seems Cringe, Story flows smoothly without logical flaws and disturbing immersion by something stupid. MC and Other Character Personalities are good as it is. The pace of story is superb , without filler and fast paced but not too much fast paced. World-Building is Simple yet Mysterious and things and clans are shown step by step.Wish Well to this Book, this should get more Views.