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Let me be the first to leave a review on this book. Great start, impressive character design and catchy plot. I can't wait to see how Davina's story unfolds.
i have been waiting for more of these space mercenary novels, and this definitely is a good read as of now, at least for me it has everything I hoped for. thx author I hope it gets more updates ??
Shameless author here ;)Casually giving myself 5 stars as extra motivation on top of all my beloved readers who willingly read my stories (I hope...)Now then... I guess I should go over what you may expect from my story.—"Who is the Main Character?" The main character is a girl named Lillian Ker Arius, who was previously a player from her previous world and achieved 100% in the world she is now in.—"What is the world about?" The World of Millis was a Rom-Com RPG that existed back in her old world, and it seems to have become her reality now. In this world, she must face monsters that appear inside/outside of gates.—"What type of person is Lillian?" She is someone who strives for fun in life, having lived through a life of boredom. However... she is pretty boring as a person. But I do hope you all would come to love her!—"Will she be overpowered?" Maybe...? It's definitely a possibility at the rate that she is going, but I won't put the tag in just in case she doesn't live up to the expectations.—"Will there be romance?" Absolutely, but it's going to be a slow one, I think...—"If there is romance, will there be a harem!?" I mean... Lillian would surely be around very attractive people... and if there is, it would definitely be a maximum of two—no more. But let's see ;)—"What exactly is the story going to be like?" I am going to try to make it dark. But ehhh... it will most likely be wholesome anyway!—"How often are you releasing chapters?" I am currently trying to write two chapters a day. But that may go down to one for a while due to RL stuff. I assure you guys that you will get chapters, though! :D—FINALLY...! "Don't you think giving yourself five stars is a bit much? Is this story really worth it?" Of course, I am full of myself! What author wouldn't be when there are people who are willing to try out their story? I am already feeling a bit giddy over my current collections! But anyway! I can't tell you whether or not my story is worth it or not. That will just depend on whether or not you would be willing to give it a try :DIf any of you have any questions that I haven't answered, please do let me know in the comments!
Alright. Time to drop a review for this peak novel. First of all, let's start with the,Writing quality.Honestly, the author outdid himself and exceeded all expectations I ever held for other webnovels apart from those on my reading list. His writing skill has this emotive style to it- which I recognize to be a trademark of entrail- yet the author easily blends it with his own style that makes it all the more mesmerizing to the eye. Once you start reading, you just can't stop and honestly the author's writing skill is one of the very best on this platform. Next comes the story development.The story develops slowly, from the point where he transmigrated to the various subtle clues left behind by the author, each clue leading to unexpected revelations. The author is well adept in the art of foreshadowing and I would also give credit to his lore development. All in all, the story takes on unexpected twists and turns. Plots that seem simple at first slowly come together into a culminating revealation.Character Design.The author seems to be even better at this. His character's dialogues flow all too well and seem quite realistic, unlike most current webnovels. Each character in this novel has a distinct trait and are unique in numerous ways. Overall, the characters are created in such a way that one would be willing to invest in their journey and not cringe out from their dialogues.And as for the,Update stability.The author sure does his best on that part, though I believe it can be improved. But nevertheless, I am of the belief that quality outweighs quantity. A factor that most authors don't seem to understand.And finally, The world background.The world background as of the current chapters isn't anything all too grand, but it's certainly well developed, well thought out and I'm pretty sure the author has more mind-blowing lore development in store for his readers.This story combines various elements into a book that is bound to keep you on your throats. Honestly, I have high expectations for this book. Don't fall my hand, Athex!...All in all, raise your heads high up. Cause ur cooking skills are beyond exceptional!
A must read novel !!?I Finished reading all the chapters available, and I can’t wait to read what happens next !
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If you like stories of people born without magic, you should read this story.Give it a chance and see for yourself.You have nothing to lose.
This gives massive jobless reincarnation vibes, the pacing is well handled and doesnt give you a massive time skip right off the bat but follows the actual second chance of a bastard who got reincarnated into the same world. Honing his skills from a young age to get the advantage! I really love where the author is going with this and I hope to see more in the future, first gene system now this? Nocturn sure doesn't miss does he.
Isn't this a funny coincidence? 'Seventy Seventh Seven' just hit 777 views!
I'll use this as my Q&A for the novelfeel free to ask me any questionsI'll answer as many as I can?I'm looking forward to your questions
The firs time I read something that has historical figures in a fantasy setup, the story looked promising and has room for a lot of development.hope it turns out great!here's a five-star review for motivation!
Lilith is an angel created by Light as a friend besides Dark.
