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Growing up as a teen has never been easy. We undergo so many hormonal, physical, mental and emotional changes and still try to cope with peer pressure and societal influence. Not to forget the academic fight we go through just to succeed in life. It becomes even harder when love comes in. It actually becomes a struggle for most of us, trying not to get hurt and still trying to hold on to family's standard and parents happiness. What happens when our brilliant, outstanding lily falls into such dilemma. Would she scale through or would it become a nightmare for her.

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First of all, I’m going to point out that this story is around 70% action and 30% mystery. If you’re looking for action-packed scenes and descriptive fights, then this story’s for you.Other than that, I love the world-building you did in the beginning and as the story continues. The plot is eventful and interesting, but it feels like a lot of the mystery is already spoiled since it tells you who the bad guy is (but idk there might be more to the story that hadn’t been revealed yet). The supernatural abilities are placed well in the combat, though it might be nice to see them used outside of fights. The characters have nice interactions and there is a strong female lead, but you could give them clearer and more distinct personalities.The major issue is probably that you should work on your punctuation, sentencing, and paragraphing. Your word choice is great but there’s a lot you can improve.But overall, I love where the story’s going and I can’t wait for more!
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Boring. It's just another simulation novel. The twist isn't even a twist at all. Effectively, the MC's name is swapped with someone else in the simulation. Just another power up fic.
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This is a well written, if slightly plain story so far.  I like it.  It's a nice casual read.This is a well written, if slightly plain story so far.  I like it.  It's a nice casual read.This is a well written, if slightly plain story so far.  I like it.  It's a nice casual read.
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Great 40-50 chapters (just 40 for translation quality) before the author sends us all to the 'wonderful' country of evil foriegners who hate yet admire the glorious people of china. This isn’t even the 'mild' racism/nationalism you’re used to…
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I barely read FL because some people tend to make the female weak and all about romance so I am glad you did not make her weak. There are some grammar mistakes and remember that periods and question marks go inside dialogue not outside of it. I like the characters interactions, it is lighthearted and fun. Your story is very insteresting and knows to keep a person reading. Keep up the good work!
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Great mc has a very real personality that shines. Also, so far the world building has been well flushed out and very creative can’t wait for more ??
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