"What the hell is that!" Mao Lu gasped just as the creature lunged at him again. Mao Lu nocked an arrow and snapped it onto the bowstring before taking aim. He steadied his arm and calmed himself. Everything around him began to slow, the galloping creature now seemed cartoonish as its mist-covered limbs propelled sluggishly forward.
this novel is good, ****** and easy to understand, the personality of the protagonist is also good, the reason for not being better is the lack of a reason for existence of the protagonist, "immortality
"Indeed, it is a bit odd," Vegeta followed up.
All he got was a heartless gaze.
An overwhelming sense of relief flooded through Aaron's shoulders, but as he unlocked the door a nagging question tugged at his brain.
"Stay put okay, I'm gonna push forward, just walk along the trail I blaze and don't be too careless."
The world has countless treasures, some hidden, some shown.
Love it, all i can say is love it.I've played a good number of strategy games similar with territory management and i would love to see a true otherworld based off of those games.Bring on the Anime!!!
It was really good the development is peak and is very specific making you have a clear imagination of the story it has gore but it isn't that bad which makes it the perfect story combined with many other genres just perfectly. My only problem is the missing details but they aren't big enough to alter the story. Overall great story ????.
Saying what i think everyone is thinking, the book is pretty much a fanfic of demonic sword. While there are differences in the small details that change the ways things happen the plot points are almost exact same to the point where i already know what's going to happen.Spoilers: Both bad fathers, both picks up mentors a smithing mentor who dies for them, both pick up an initial mentor to start off who gets surpassed and dies for them, both mother kills themselves to not restrain son, both kill abusive sibling and run, both go an academy and dominate as a rare darkness cultivator, both flee the mainland as trouble hits to go join a hidden darkness set, both darkness set patriarchs are looking for a dark inheritor, both Mc's act really similar in mannerisms, both end up having a Op transformation that ends up being a trump card, the list just goes on and on and its just tiring how similar they are.
I like your work,and your story is very good your writing style amazing i will read all your novels for sure i read many books but I didn’t satisfied with any your novel is first i read ít completed and I’m really satisfied?
It's good. It has a typo here or there but for the most part the grammar and spelling are pretty good.