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From what I’ve read, I can say for a fact that the story is Good so far. I got hooked when the mc became a student of villian academy. Op villian, heroes , Just hope the book does not get dropped and I need more chapters!!! I would recommend this to someone who’s looking for an mc that has brain and brawns and put them to good use.Then this is for you. And for those of you who are not sure about reading it since the chapters are small you can add it to your library and check it out later when it has more chapters. That’s all I have to say(I meant type) I don’t plan on writing anymore spoiler. ( I may write another review when the story progresses further and their is more chapters)
wow, a very interesting storyline. i think this is the first of it's kind that i have read. very detailed in its description. captivating back stories. this invokes emotions in the readers. i hope to see more updates. keep it up
so its pretty good ngl I like how you implemented naruto's parents and jutsu in it but I have 2 questions.1. will he get the sharingan and if so the mangekyo sharingan too.2. will he get kakashis lightning blade and other jutsu.
I really like this novel. I hope they will restart translate in it again. Even though the story plot is slow at the start it will get interesting in the later part. Even though this translation is drop I will keep supporting it so that they will restart the translation. Otherwise I have to read that machine translation..
This is a really great book with the theme of magic and isekai which I appreciate so very much. I like how the MC makes so many reliable friends and I also like how he has the drive to become stronger by all means possible
i just want to write a review, I already read this on royal road. there is no NTR, ntr means when a guys steal the mc girl by sex. Mc wife and best friend didn't cross the line, they only kissed. MC best friend only kiss the mc's wife.this was the number one novel on royalroad at that time that's why many people put a NTR comment on the review section of this novel to discourage new readers.sorry for bad english its not my native language
The minute he joined his mom and became her deciple the story went downhill and became cringe worthy honestly I don’t care for sentimental stories I thrive and enjoy chaos and pure unfiltered evil so this story is not for me I saw the antihero tag and got excited about this but the mc is soft and pitiful nevertheless this story has great Potential and others will enjoy it so don’t take my criticism seriously and keep writing ✍️
So it basically raising and defecting his enemies are you sure it not there pride. I read so many of these books already I hope this one makes senses and not have a dozen woman.
If you are like me, you read the synopsis and got your hopes up, only to be let down by the piss poor writing, the translation is fine for the most part, but the main character and every other character so far are totally boring, such an interesting concept ruined by an inept author.But as always, this novel is so shit that it will be picked.
This needs to be finished. I hope that Webnovel does the courtesy of allowing this novel to be completed. Even though this is different than butterfly blue’s other novel, this is at least worthy enough to allow the last 170 chapters to be done.
Though the novel’s grammar does get better the beginning chapters make no sense due to the horrendous grammar the character interactions are unrealistic and feel annoying to read after a while so overall this is a novel with a great premise but an author who doesn't edit or reread before posting causing the story to be subpar