Well the story seems to be good but the grammar sucks. The most frustrating thing is that most of these errors can be resolved by just a simple review before posting. Hope the author corrects this.
It's a pity. the story was decent but just so random.I also don't see myself spending a single SS on this story.There is alot to improve before signing a contract lol.
it's start kinda good but the quality start decreasing up to 60 chapters and there's also an flashback no jutsu is that really needed? because i kinda become lost when flashback's happening and it is kinda manipulative when his gonna cure sophia mother and her when situation become unbearable don't mind my annoying opinion and continue your work goodluck
the first novel where the spoiled young master is very smart and cowarldly haha,well it at least isn't your typical xianxia novel where the MC is the hero and win everything.this story present the view from other perspectivewhere it isn't that the MC just boringly cultivate, defeat enemy, have a harem, and be an immortal(those boring xianxia plot)
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i just want to write a review, I already read this on royal road. there is no NTR, ntr means when a guys steal the mc girl by sex. Mc wife and best friend didn't cross the line, they only kissed. MC best friend only kiss the mc's wife.this was the number one novel on royalroad at that time that's why many people put a NTR comment on the review section of this novel to discourage new readers.sorry for bad english its not my native language
Review at ch 35.This is a very good story. It seems that author already has a well planned story with him. Hence, the pacing of story is also very good till now, without any filler fights or face slapping, which is a staple of Chinese manhwa. Also, things are explained from the first chapter itself, instead of letting things be a mystery for hundreds of chapters to bait the readers. The reason for reincarnation, and the way story might go, everything is explained very well within first 10 chapters itself.. Do read this story if you are bored. This is among the best webnovel can offer
Tbh i enjoy harrm novels but Not novels where the mc just thinks with his dong. Our mc gets betrayed by his closest brothers and actual brother who tells him his harem of wives all cucked him and his First thought in class is to add his fucking Teacher to his harem not even prepare from The Apocalypse thats about to happen. fck this shit man, this mc is worse than a fucking animal at least animals think about survival before trying fck eachother
Love this novel, not sure why it's not more read. But it's super fun and great read. The world is great the MC is great and the writing is very good. Recommend.
I read this because of this novel`s title. I love a villain MC who fight against world`s protagonist. I like the ero scene so far, but i hope author will give more highlight to the story development, and maybe level up MC scum and scheme level. Give some misunderstanding and make him dark hero is always welcomeWhat I like about this story, is how author describe Feng Shiyao (MC`s dual cultivation partner). I like her character design, and I hope she will grow into a yandere haha. If she won`t get jealous over other woman that MC meet, than her feeling is not sincere, and we don`t need that kind of heroineWell, so far it recommendable as long as it won`t go to the polygamy or harem roadThat`s my opinion, thank you for today`s chapter ?
This brings a lot of fresh ideas that I've never seen been done before and it was very refreshing. It's not perfect and does have some minor inconsistencies but still overall very solid writing. Recommend it highly, especially if you are looking for something new.
Terrible, terrible pacing. Although well written nothing really happens. There's too much exposition and too little story. I could last only until chap. 70 before dropping. By then, the MC is still a 10 year old kid that doesn't really do anything. There's a lot of world building and characters interaction, but they're boring and mundane. Simple things that could be described in 3 paragraphs are stretched to 3 whole chapters. The author seems to have wanted to make a harry potter meets douluo dalu but couldn't pull it of.