I know the title is reborn as a ice dragon but I feel like it abit misleading since he becomes anything but an ice dragon through his evolution
waah mere sher, really good work here.Liked it a lot. Keep going, it has some darn good potential if properly executed. Loved the concept of it so far.
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To be honest, there are some parts confused me so I tried to read it a few times and I could take a grasp of what's happening. A minor grammar mistakes but you surely can improve it??
Finally the author is back. I loved the prequel of this novel and have high hopes for this novel. Fortunately, it has quick updates. Eagerly waiting for Azaroth and his retainers.
First time i'm reading a grim reaper book. And i will have to say i'm quite impressed. The book is well written although minor errors are present, its still very much intriguing. One of the few non-cliche books here on Webnovel. I'll recommend this to anyone.
THIS NOVEL IS NOICE. HOPE THIS GETS PICKED!!!
You have a very interesting way of writing and I can notice the amount of research that was put into this work. Your contrast of American and Japanese culture is executed well. You write well and I like certain vocab that you use. I am enjoying this book this far and I will read on in my spare time. Best of luck to you.
Yes yes yes. Also, I do have to ask what this novel's name was in chinese.I loved the story and want more stories like this. For now. I'm waiting for more updates. I like this
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Please release more chapters, , it's kind of boring waiting, why are you holding back chapters? Your storyline is great so far so good, though you're taking long to introduce the characters needed to make the book interesting
writing is pretty good for the most part, plenty readable, however occasionally some explanations get somewhat convoluted, but not really a deal breaker.updates arent exactly fast, but writing is difficult so i cant hammer the author for it really.story, honestly it starts out pretty good, till chapter 30-40ish the story is pretty interesting, new things happen, but after that i feel like things starts to get stale pretty quickly, combined with the fact that i feel like the author almost forgot that the game system was a thing between chapter 40-100. theres just a lot of repeat fighting. the power ups feel boring in a way, "i want to see the world in chaos" and he gets time dialation? and then its never brought up again. the cross/church is talked about being something good for like 15 chapters. and its just exp bonus?. ive rambled enough here lets move on.characters. they arent bad per say, just occasionally bipolar. i kind of expect a "reasonable tyrant" type of mc, but he just switches between dumb violence, and stupid sympathy.world background is fine-ish, and is fed pretty dynamically, eg not info dumps. but i still feel like i know nothing. i think alot of this can be attributed to the small scale of the current "world" since its effectively like a 1km radius and its being described almost a bit too much for whats actually there?anyway i ended up putting it on hold at chapter 128, i dont hate the story, it just feel really dull to binge. good luck