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Guys can anyone please review don't know if 8 should read or not
here to take on some lighthearted novel and experience a bit of female mc stories, hopefully it's good.
The silly Alchemist
Tf ?
The author went on hiatus years ago
An amazing story from start to finish. Yes there is a translation issue especially halfway through but the overall plot is worth it.
You will find it easier to understand if you have read stories related to chinese mythology
Story is of a similar concept to - my senior brother is too stable, another novel suferring from translation issues
Wish I had known this 8 months ago. I'm still p*ss*d about the ending.
The start of the story was very promising. However, it gets a little sloppy as it progresses. Just a little tho.The plotline was unexpected, the story was short and had little major events happening here and there. (Not enough)The fact that the first Supreme demon trampled on the MC and ML on his feet so easily for his personal goals made me very agitated but atleast the author proved that both MC and ML was not OP. Oh wait, the ML is OP, it's just that the first Supreme demon was a million times more OP than the ML. The ML's power was unreasonable unlike the villain that had logic behind his power. Seriously, the ML just transmigrated, only his soul was supposed to remain and not his cultivation. He did not even cultivate when he obtained countless treasures nor did he use them to raise his power.This could have been so much better if some world building and more adventuring was added but it seems that there was only two places where the major events took place? The capital and the foggy forest (I forgot the name) I think.I guess the author didn't want the story to be complicated. Meh, I was just thinking of the endless possibilities that could have made this soooo much better. I'm a perfectionist so don't hate me for my rambling.
Dear author,
Wonderful plot
While the story captivated my interest and held its own, I couldn't help but draw comparisons to the last book I read, which, in my opinion, surpassed this one. The narrative was engaging, but the previous book had a certain magic that elevated it to a higher level. Despite giving this story a respectable 4-star rating, the characters' designs seemed reminiscent of the earlier read, lacking the innovative touch that would have set them apart. It's not that the characters weren't well-crafted; they just felt a bit too familiar. In the end, the tale was enjoyable, but the shadow of the exceptional previous book loomed large, making it difficult to award a perfect rating. Nevertheless, it remains a commendable effort with room for improvement.
This is a novel to red. It is interesting an can keep you hooked. Bravo!!!!!
So, we start with a big brother and a little sister facing an great upheaval.
The first chapter was q little confusing I believe.
things happened to fast, not even enough time to start even caring for the mc and his sister then bam Apocalypse.
at the same time the advantage is that things happen fast but not so fast you start to curse.
This is a weak to strong story with mc starting very week.
But anyone who likes survival, apocalypse and so on while appreciate.
This reminds me Gods and Devils (without the racism obviously) or The movie residence Evil.
I believe this story has great potential
