During the first chapters I really felt that this is gonna be a really interesting story. But there are so many things I really have trouble to understand. 1. The author constantly jumps between scenes often without any intention of coming back to it. 2. In 41 chapters tons of ppl got introduced only to be completely left behind without further attention. 3. The reasoning and the hole chapter with Undine is imo terrible, especially when it comes to reasoning and behaviour of characters. 4. The storyline is in complete chaos because nothing is explained(except for some game mechanics), I can't even try to judge the world background because nothing is explained be it about the game world or the real world. The reader is constantly kept in the dark. While I think this could be a really good story, the behaviour of almost all characters feel childish and immature. For example Qianna(not sure about her name, the girl our MC saved from Aaron) was stronger than Aaron but after their first fight she never tried to get rid of him when he repeatedly attacked the MC. The only thing she'd did was watching and calling of "Watch out!". The list of unreasonable behaviour goes on and on and I don't understand why it is written like that. It takes away a characters credibility and makes it look laughable.