good start and hopefully there will always be more interesting updates
I tried but your grammar is just way too awful I could barely understand anything in those very very short chapters ik you want to release a bunch of chapters but this isn't the way to go about it bro
chapter 23Interesting so far. Cool concept. I'm confused because of the tags because of its villain, killer and dark tag cause I still don't see it yet in current development(I'm happy). Maybe in future chapters. There's not much plot because it just started, but I think it's good so far.
Honestly for the free available chapters i find this to be a really good novel so far. There isn’t much more i could as for other than more chapters daily but if we are getting chapters of this quality then im all good with the author to continue at their current pace.
My brutally honest review Firstly not engaging at allSecondly protagonist personality has no flare as such most readers wouldn't want to continue the storyThirdly story line could be way betterFourthly unlike all the other books I have extensively criticized calling em trash this was the only one I couldn't finish And lastly I am purposely picking faults as such it probably deserves a way higher rating than am giving it, given that there is no such thing as a perfectly written book with no flaws...... Well maybe there is ..... nevertheless that's just my philosophy
Hasta ahora solo he visto el inicio de la novela, es ligera y entretenida, espero con ansias el encuentro entre los protagonistas°w°/
"Oh thats sound interesting," said me casually.
So he was not done yet too?
And of course the world must have need a villain right? Because I really like to create something complicated, can i who the one that create villain? "
"Whats potion master?" Jester asked.
And immediately Pak Rioy asked Mr. Sange "So Mr. Sangefull, what are the details of your problem."
"So...I will never lose hope."