Far Beyond the Abyss

Editor review. Hey guys, glad to see this novel finally published :D It's been in the works for over a year now, but due to a few changes of translators, it'll been constantly delayed. When we lost the first translator, I specifically requested to stay on this project because I enjoy the story so much. So, obviously, I'm a big fan of the story. The MC has some heartfelt moments, some hilarious moments (the 'Spicy.' in one of the early chapters killed me), and some smart/scheming moments, which is pretty much all I ask for in a novel :DIf you have any questions or notice any errors or inconsistencies (they're inevitable, especially with a change of translator midway), feel free to reply here or message me on Discord. My ID is millman97#8008.

What a pothole story conflict with setting since the beginning what it say can only use last item form boss of previous game in new game but jus next to it you can see it have a lot of item  bring in to use

A good novel, writing quality is excellent. But I would say a bit more world background would make the novel a very good choice. Over all, a new novel that would catch your attention very fast.

this was a GREAT story but the author ruins it like always as he tried to nurf the mc !!!!!!first there was a lot of flaws with the novel overall but it was still acceptable as it was a really great story, the biggest being the mc personality and overall just him as a person he was a COMPLETE idiot and the author didn’t do much to really try to improve him like most definitely would, he got certain skills to suppress his MANY flaws but that just made him more stupid in fact it’s this very reason how this story got ruined basically mc try’s to be superman and be a hero but unlike most heroes he isn’t smart he doesn’t plan before acting he never considered failure with is considered death and much more so basically he try’s to play hero he accomplished his task instead of retreating after he infiltrated the enemies base even after noticing the HUGE strength gap he doesn’t retreat instead he fought and got killed whats worse is author revived him in the body of a monster but wait it gets worse he's now a GOBLIN yes people a goddamn goblin with absolutely no stats and his system in hiatus he even ate bugs thinking **** like maybe it taste good ? WHO THE HELL IS THIS STUPID it isn’t physical possible to be so stupid unless he was retarded which obviously he’s not as both magic and cultivation makes you smarter in which he does BOTH ??u200d♂️??u200d♂️??u200d♂️?? it was a terrible excuse for the author to nerf the mc i cannot believe i wasted my time on this utter trash giving stones a day even on non release days as i was an absolute fanboy i mean dude any monster i mean it literally could have been anything BUT A GODDAMN HIDEOUS ASS GOBLIN ?? im disappointed at least now i’ll know to be cautious with original novels you can’t trust these 2bit authors such as these ?????????

Nice.Good story.The 1st chapter have some errors.Do your best and thanks for the story.?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

Absolutely amazing, I love the synopsis of the book. I also love the characters. Looking forward to reading more In the future.........................