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Grammar quality is to bad for me to really want to read it, no idea if it gets better. The idea behind it is good though.
Personally, I think confidence and morale are critically important. I placed this review here just to reflect that.As of now, the story isn't really face-paced. Ideally, I think it would be better to increase the pace but I also don't want to compromise too much on the details or risk creating plot-holes.I do re-read and check things to minimize the plot-holes as much as realistically possible.I also take constructive criticism very seriously. I will try to incorporate every comment that seems feasible and beneficial for the story's growth.Overall, this is a long-term project with a lot of potential.
Okay so it has been a while since I wrote a review, so take this one with a grain of salt. Some chaps felt short but since they covered the event well, it was fulfilling.The writing quality is good IMO. I am mostly saying that because the sentences are easy to understand. There seems to be a need for mid dialogue punctuations in some sentences, but this is an easy fix.No comments on the stability of updates: As someone who cares about quality more than quantity. But when I say so many chaps on 28th I was like :OThe story development is somewhat fast with a lot of dialogues... But I like it since the characters are portrayed well.Now the interesting part here is the Character Design... The dialogues are set well making it easier to understand the characters.The world background part needs a bit of work here IMO... mostly because it's overshadowed by the dialogues in many chapters. But this mostly depends on how well one can imagine the surrounding. /me secretly screams GIMME MORE SCIENCE IN SCI_FI...
smh you shouldn't went premium you need to fix up your story and get better reviews in the comments section before making people have to pay to read you already have one story on that you should have used this one to grow that's all I had to say I saw improvement in the last couple chapters but now i wont know if your going to improve anymore