Loved every detail and how you described every scenery especially in chapter one, you’re doing great with the world building
I really enjoy your work! I'd love to stay connected and keep up with your latest creations. Do you have any social media or email? It would be great to be in touch~
This is a story with a very nice plot, it has a huge amount of untapped potential. Author I hope you utilise it well, overall it's a nice work.
This book is way too awesome to be alone.The interesting part starts from the start. A great story awaits you if you just read the first page.loved this book.The writing style is great and strong. liked the words and sentences construction.keep it up
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the auther tries his best to make it every thing ground breaking. right from the start.he doesn't has experience.I good story plot. but it is ruined by how impatient the auther was. moreover you are really in a hurry ..the starting is messed. it destroys the taste of the reader.rewrite that. if you want to ensure that people open their wallet for you.
Hello, everyone. I am the Author of Alteria. I hope you enjoy the first part of the story I wanted to make for a long time. If you do, please leave a review and tell me what you like and dislike about it! This will help me improve as an author!This is only the beginning, so I hope you're ready for the ride!
The protagonist is a little dumb, but I really liked the progress of the story.Keep up the good work.********************************************************************
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Recommended, The Authors need to work on the updating of the chapters regularly. This serious will become famous and I wish all the very best to the Author.
Really nice story but I think you should have an editor, not that the writing has any mistakes but some punctuation's can really help increase the reading experience. It's difficult reading without those.
This is quite a great novel not fast paced or slow paced. The plot is quite thick and mc is not OP from the start it seems like his powers have 9 seals for now he unlocked his 2nd one he can type 100 lines of codes he also started to cultivate his in the first stage 2nd lvl or gate whatever it looks like he is good friends with the clans head daughter its not of the stage where there is love i hope that it does develope there soon mc started to cultivate late in his age but he recoded his body to gather qi a LOT faster so he should be able to catch with other people mc is lvl headed i like that a lot i just hope he is not dense and i hope for a harem xD