The story seems like it would be interesting but after a few chapters I can continue reading. The grammar is as bad as MTL website, It hurts my head and gets truly annoying, even more so when you actually start getting into the story and plot but have no idea what's happening.All I can say is if you really want to spread this story use grammarly at the very least, that's why people come to this site and put up with the bullshit rankings and crappy stories because the grammar is in general (not always) up to par.