The World Never Enough

Too many repeats, had tp go back several times, annoying. Brother sister friends are out of loopy road, they are there but how do they look like and what are their character like.  And isnt the sister way too exyreme and foolish. Dont make sense most of the time, Not enough detailing and presentation. U made the wine but can't there some word play there

The world’s really interesting, I love the mystery of it, and the mist gives a legitimate reason for the protagonist to be so indefferent. Unlike other novels where he just seems edgy. I also like how the author handles the overpoweredness of the MC. Finally, his ruthlessness is great, I find it annoying when the protagonists never kill or just let their enemies go away just to give the author reasons to make higher realm enemies target him. This story also give the much needed situational awareness that so many enemies lack in cultivation novels, like when the elders of the demon lands clan banished his ancestor for targeting the protagonist I was extremely surprised.Keep it up author!

this is the definition of wasted potential sadly it starts out very good but then betrays itself by going from the mc havikg some tamed tiger to being the lord of a elve and goblin tribe in 2 chapters

BRUUUUUUUUH..!....................................................................................................................................

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not a bad read..I like it ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????