first chapter is good. if the novel is done right it can be a good novel. always liked novels like this. modern day with system that's about business and such. hope it goes well.
I know it's still a bit too early to write a review, but I just had to nevertheless, because this novel is straight out the twin to "Treasure Hunt Tycoon" with all the racism and the MC's ability to find treasures among junk and roaming around people with lack of a moral compass. I more or less enjoyed "THT
author here, first time writing a book am curious to see the reviews and feedback. pls don't be harsh with the criticism ?
"Hostile activity confirmed, my liege. 25 meters ahead of us, inside the main chapel. Permission to engage?"
Her new home was ready to move into. She had decorated it to her taste, not Sapphira's and definitely not Aden's either, it was hers. She loved the feeling she got when she was in her own home. It felt good to have something that was truly hers and not anyone else's.
I'm surrounded by darkness, but not like in my nightmares. It's different. Then I see him, he rushes towards me arms open wide and scoops me up into a huge hug. He whispers into my ear, "I love you, I'm so sorry I left you."
"Youuuuu" (Mini )
DELETE THEM ALL, BECAUSE I WILL NEVER FINISH THEM.
Judging by the hole in the satellite picture
You'll never shine if you don't glow
The water's getting warm so you might as well swim
Somebody once asked could I spare some change for gas?