The Tutorial is in Chinese

good ???????????keep it updating ????????please send more chapters ???????????????????????????

This is one of the best books I've read.Of course there are some holes like the description of the character design especially their looks, isn't as great as what I'm used too but pass that, this book is a great read

Woah......time travel , my all time favourite. I always love a good time travel story . I would love to see how things play out for him . Can't wait for more chapters to be out . You have my support ?

New author who could use a little bit of work on his English at times, but that being said it's better than 99% of the stuff on this site already! The majority of the time the author follows a logical progression, and shows the motivations for the characters actions in a way that makes sense and is engaging.I think this author has a lot of potential, and if he had a professional editor on hand this novel would be almost publishable!Keep on writing, keep on practicing, keep on doing your thing!As a piece of advice, you might want to start distancing yourself from readers comments. As your novel gets more and more popular you will eventually attract some trolls, and some very loud negative voices from idiots who don't know what a proper story is, and couldn't write one to save their lives. Make sure not to let them discourage you!

Bruhhhhhhh really?This is just getting overboard at this point.Makes me wonder if webnovel has been abandoned. Sheesh, is you are just gonna copy a finished novel and pass it off as a new one than what's the point.And here I was thinking webnovel actually got something readable for once.

This story is basically a rip off of Jay Aslan by Elawn with worse grammar. I do think it could become something good it though, just make sure it does take a different path and you don’t just change the names of people and places.