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It's like the author is 10 and has never got a Christmas present so he processed his sad live with this story where he gets everything for free. The characters are bad the story has 2 sides good and bad but nothing between. The Mc is like a child himself and I can say for sure that when I was 20 I was not like him. The dialogs needs improvement. I can understand that the author wants to create something that we haven't read a 100 times but to say hey I want it here you have it for free is not the best way in my opinion. After a month he is the strongest person on the continent, well I can life with that but than improve the background story and the plot
I love it so far can't wait to read more. great world building cuz I sense an economy. also I'm bad at reviews so xpppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp
This story had a great start. The system was a little off, but could be corrected and improved over time. It did not get improved and only went downhill from there. The system seems to forget simple things. For example, it missed when the MC killed a three legged chicken and it did not update the Exp on it. It just randomly says, “you killed enough things to here’s a level or two”. The character has many loopholes and for a character that is supposed to get smarter every level, he seems to forget simple things. One time he decides to kill two mages because, “although they are non hostile they provide a passive threat to me that could go off anytime”. The problem is that the MC forgot he has this power that can make people forget things and make them have illusions. He could have just made them forget any trace of him then put them under an illusion so they can’t see him or his traces. Also the grammar is quite bad. I must say though that this story had great potential. The way the character thought was in a unique way, a way I really liked (at first). The power he had was also unique. A great book that had huge potential, that gave me more thoughts and an unique way of thinking. Poor execution though in my opinion.
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I finished the MTLing 896 chapters I found. I love it! They were just about to sign the marriage certificate!!!!!!! Why did it stop there? I want to know more! Sadly, I can't find any more chapters after chapter 896. it hasn't been updated since 2018... I feel like I got knocked unconscious just as I was beginning to savour the sweet delicious taste of my favorite chocolate cake. ????????Let me know if anyone found the rest of the novel please!!! Whatever language it is in, I will MTL it!