Overall this is a good story, but the auther makes grammar mistakes every so often, the mistakes don't hinder the enjoyment of the story though.
So hard to read. The translator/editor or whoever comments on every other sentence. Half of a chapter is nonsense from them.Only on chapter 2, and this combined with a boring start is making me consider dropping
It's the first time, I'm reading this kind of story. It's definitely nice to read. In fact, I'm already in love with this universe and it's characters. In the beginning only, the ML is weirdo. Your idea is really good.
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This better not be dropped. I swear to whoever you believe in I'll beat you up till next week. I'll do it...................................