Arthur please edit the earlier chapters and fix the formatting it's a chore reading it, I'm sure you could find a proofreader if you asked for one.
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Garbage, i know we all use this word alot around here but my god i can't find any other word to describw this thing.The first 60-70 chapters were pretty fun to read and i though this would be the next system novel to pop off but then it was as if the author didn't want to write a system novel anymore and instead started a generic plot line about immortality, dude, i came to read a system novel, if i wanted to read a adventure novel i would just go re-read legend of the great sage.The mc is the plainest thing ever, no desires, no motivatoon, no real thoughts, he just reacts to whatever happens in front of him, the side-characters? what side-characters? completely forgettable.
Really greatly written fiction over here I found!The characters have some intense persona and their chemistry is even more interesting. Such a great read!
It is not better to live and not die to reincarnate. You see, if the government controls spiritual energy, maybe it's just a lie to kill people and keep them from revolting.
Jamaican authors are great writers, literary genius', creativity at its finest..one finds themselves going from fantasy to realithGreat story line cant wait to read more..great job Mr.Gene
This book is amazing. Great character development. You can feel the way the MC thinks. Author has really written a master piece here. It is simply a work of art! Author, please don't drop this novel. ALL I WANT IS MORE!!!
i trust the author
keep writing bro. i like that mc didn't just die and reincarnated in ch 1 as usual but u're focusing on building his character habits to get us acquainted. IT'S GOOD THOUGHT. ps focus more on describing the appearance of characters and world building. As I noticed u were ignoring that.
Delete this, this is created by Rick Riordan.Otherwise, give ALL credit to Rick Riordan.
The story is very good and as you described it is wonderful and please bring more episode soon. I am very much looking forward to next episode
190 + chapters and an amazingly committed author. A well-written story so far. 10 Chapter in and I'm invested. I think the story is well planned and I like how it progresses. The earlier chapter's pacing is not bad but I do like a faster pace overall I enjoy it.