A fantastic book written by a fantastic person. Tha author has written every chapter pretty well
I like this book very much
Love this book.
May the stars align for the author
I was first a little apprehensive because the plot didn't seem like it would be to my taste, but the blurb really drew me in. I made the decision to give it a shot and retain this in my collection. I would want to see more Houses participate. This story has so much promise, so I'll be watching. I can also appreciate the elegance of shorter chapters.
Well the story is interesting. I would like you to talk more about the characters and show what is going on and not make time skips. Try your best! It is good for a beginning.
This is a hidden gem. I hope to see the day when it finally shines.
4 chapter in, and I see sign of ntrAuthor intentionally create a lucky pervert moment between a potential harem member with a random guy, and the MC just treat everyone as an NPC, so he doesn't even bother about it.The guy while trying to save the girl, somehow undress her pant, and panties, got to see it all in full glory, and the MC who act like a system of the girl just laugh.This plot is completely unnecessary and to me, it a sign of the girl not gonna be in the mc harem.It feel wrong, since in the synopsis give the impression that, the mc will build a harem, base on the girl that he reincarnated.This is just 4 chapter in, so I won't consider it as much of a spoiler, just want to ask, if my gut is correct on this one?
It's machine translated or translated by someone with poor English. A good story ruined by appalling translation.Must say the beginning was translated properly but turned sloppy from around chapter 7.
This review is after reading the first 50 chapters during the trial period. All I can say is - this novel is extremely boring.First off, let me state that I'm not a big fan of Sign In novels. I've always found them to be a really boring type of system, copied from some of the worst free-to-play games. However, I went into this novel with an open mind, willing to give it a chance.The main problem with this novel isn't the Sign In system, but just that it's so incredibly boring. It's written more like a documentary about the life of an immortal, rather than a story of the events around the hero.The author has no sense of how to create tension or suspense in any scene. The MC is an almost emotionless doll that never reacts to anything around him, he's always lost in his own world. Even on the rare occasions that he gets into a fight, he has an utterly deadpan personality, and it feels like I'm seeing the author write about a walking piece of tofu rather than a human being. The fight scenes aren't completely worthless, as the MC uses a silly fighting style similar to One Punch Man, where he kills everything with a single punch, but even that just feels boring because there's no strategy to the fights. The fights get over before they've even begun, and most of the time the MC doesn't even know why the fight happened in the first place, because he's such a boring blob of tofu that he doesn't care to find out.Another serious problem with this novel is how it tries to badly ramp up the drama through scenes where the MC does an "amazing" task in front of other disciples of his sect. The problem is that the author has no idea what's actually impressive to look at through the eyes of a reader. For example, he spends several chapters talking about how "the MC dared to take one more step" in order to obtain treasures or walk on a lake, all while a crowd of background characters keeps shouting out how absolutely amazing it is that the MC can keep taking that step. It feels very artificial and forced, to the point that I want to puke just thinking about it.On the positive side, because the MC is so utterly bland, some of the side characters appear more relatable. There's a female character, a senior sister, who's actually wiling to listen to the MC's advice and words, and there's a senior brother who takes him seriously and accepts him as a rival on the path of cultivation. The problem is just that they're still incredibly shallow, up to the point I've seen. Rather than have independent personalities of their own, they feel like they were specially constructed characters created just to make the MC look better.The story tries to show us that even for a genius MC, it still takes hundreds of years to walk down the path of immortal cuktivation. While that's a nice mindset to have, the problem is when there's nothing at all happening during all those hundreds of years.TL DR : It's a boring story about an unexpressive MC doing nothing but cultivating for hundreds of years.
The problem is with the boring petty clichés, and the perverted petty character of the hero (Do the Chinese all think about girls and Lolita??!?), Doesn't force lead to domination, monopoly and occupation through cruelty, blood, and a cruel sword without mercy!? This is what we are looking for, real human characters, we don't want perverted Chinese characters and cartoons, I hope other readers will publish my comment in all the Chinese trivia novels, so that the officials can see them and make some changes, heroes of justice, bad guys, good guys, just childish words. We don't want such trivial words
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You did a very great work author. Full of new ideas and I must say the MC is really strong. Keep going because I'm my opinion it's going to be a very great novel in future ?
Its a very good story on some Star Wars characters we had. Definitely fits how they were roleplayed in the server. This is by far one of the best stories on all of the characters we played as and some of the ones our friends played as. DEFINITELY RECOMMEND
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