The Boy Next Door 3.0

i hope more chapter to be unlock i love the stories

It's machine translated or translated by someone with poor English. A good story ruined by appalling translation.Must say the beginning was translated properly but turned sloppy from around chapter 7.

Honestly this is a pretty mediocre novel. Massive info dumps and no actual world or character building. Feels like a rough draft or outline rather than an actual story. Reading it makes one feel like the author is just winging it as he writes the novel and lacks any real sense of direction or plot.

When I first figures that a game and cultivation world is involved, I thought it would be yet another game system in a cultivation world. As it turned out, it's actually a transmigrated character in a cultivation world who can move into a game, which is created specifically to affect reality. I don't think I have ever encountered this specific combination before. The chapters so far have been a nice treat. Let's hope it will continue to be so.

Trash novel, so generic it hurts, mc is basic as **** his kids really only eat and are used for comedic effect, every woman that sees him cums apparently, then falls in love, hey you looked at me kinda wrongly-welp it's the death sentence mate. The funniest thing is how fucking unrealistic the interactions, btw every second guy they meet wants to **** with the mc, the ones that don't adore him and are ready to suck him off. I can continue but at the same time i don't want you to waste so much time on this ****, unlike me.

Don't be fooled by the high rating, it's because the author can review his own novel and give it 5 stars any number of times.The novel is just another crappy fanfic, with the MC basically jerking off to FY, and not doing anything interesting. The grammar is tolerable, which isn't saying a lot. The author's exposition is telling us what we already know, instead of adding anything new to the table. And the author's take on FY is awful.TLDR: Don't read it if you're expecting a decent fanfiction.