Nice book bro. You made the baseline kinda simple but story is nice and comedic it needs suspense and it will be good. I recommend to read it
I've read a few chapters, and while reading it, I couldn't seem to take my eyes off it. Nice storyline author. Keep writing.
Although I do not want to spoil anything, I think the story is good, I appreciate the names' inspiration, and I only hope Ragnarok gets to see his parents again. They will surely suffer until his return.
The thing that captured my heart is the intricate world-building, the deep, multidimensional characters, and the brilliantly designed system. You can feel the author’s passion and hard work poured into every detail. Trust me, this story is worth every moment of your time. Give it a shot—it’s a ride you won’t regret!
I have varied thoughts about this story, which means I liked it! It moved really quickly through her early transitions and I nearly put it down when she started cooking (I’m not a fan of reading about recipes) but it moved on pretty quickly and carried on with the plot - I love that! I’ve been pleasantly surprised numerous times (I’m often able to know what’s about to happen before they’re done setting it up) and that alone makes me satisfied. There are a few cliches but they were at least combined in unique ways - I appreciate the thoughtfulness apparent throughout!
Shynobi here! This novel has around 10 books. I have already drafted the first 5 books. Book 1 is already done. I don't know how many chapters this will take, but I hope that you guys will like this book. It is a world-building book with intrigue, adventure, and love mixed in the middle.Please give me your comments guys! Thank you!
A very solid read of you are looking for a personality and personal power growth type book. The only reason world background is a 3 is because the book is only and the beginning stages of this world.( Plus this book is the best out of all the similar story of this category by far!.)
your book is very intresting , but your updates are very poor
I am absolutely loving this story. The characters are fun and easy to become attached to. The comparisons between their time periods make everything more impactful.
It’s not a bad start for the story but I feel like the author is moving through plot lines too fast. Slow the story down a little bit, flush characters out a little more. Read through first 30
Hello everyone. Its me Valerian07. First of all, I would like to thanked all readers who read my novel and thank you for the power stones. And for your comments and reviews, I really appreciate that. Of course, I gave myself a credit for being a writer despite having other jobs haha. And the ideas you all gave me. Its a lit, not gonna lie.
The story seem interesting judging by the first few chapter.